ken_wanderer

Well, folks, as the author of course I have to give it a solid 5 star. Do I believe it's a 5 star maybe? it sure has the potential. But my writing skills is not there yet and that's why I wish to implore upon y'all good and constructive criticism. So that I can make this into the masterpiece it deserves to be.

oh god my worst enemy then; studying for the sat, I have started to nitpick even the tiniest details and if it doesn't sit right with me I get absolutely furious and triggered.

You're clearly insinuating that a living condition could be racist is what I mean.

Although, I am not caught up with the latest chapter I really love how this story is developing but a huge disappointment is the writing quality. Note that i am in the beginning chapters and i am presuming that the quality will get better and I really hope it does. This might just be me nitpicking but great story

Just my theory, but this residual energy and whatnot already exists in the brain, it's just that it shows when a person is dead. So, I'm guessing that by using aether he can train this energy without "dying".

Honestly, quite good but the main problem with this story ,to me at least, is the large amout of unneeded info around the 400 mark but overall I really enjoyed this and I'd recommend this to be read

I have a feeling he'll still be clueless if he ever meets feifei and he'll undress in front of her just cuz she's his "wife" or something if yk what i mean

While spurting the you know what..