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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Posted

    Shameless author review, because why not? Story starts edgy and injurious with all these killing vibes, death and destruction. Revenge and whatnot. It's not written to stay like that; they'd be rectified in the future. I dunno, would I be benevolent enough to give a happy ending? Why not stay to find out... Ha-ha, I feel guilty for the promo.

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    A Chaos King’s Election Week
    Fantasy · coffeescreameclair
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to Akugbo_Larry

    I appreciate the stars, thank you. Although, why is there a lot of “Heres”?

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    Snow White and the Seven Gods
    Urban · coffeescreameclair
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Commented

    An honest cyberpunk setting, yeah, that's what I like

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    The Abandoned multiverse
    Fantasy · Visal_Word_Smith
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to Maxamed_Maxamuud_1115

    I'm sorry, I don't understand what you're asking. Could you perhaps mince words? —because I'm not a mind reader. —I can suppose you're trying to ask that I help you with an application, but sorry, I don't have a job which ties me in applying someone to somewhere or something. I can't help you with that. —Or if you're trying to recruit me, "offering me an application", I might want to know your terms and conditions. —I'm so sorry, I don't speak one-liners. I hope you can elaborate for my puny mind to understand.

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    Snow White and the Seven Gods
    Urban · coffeescreameclair
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Commented

    Ooof, this is awkward....

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    The Wandering Intruder
    Fantasy · RDA
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to Shimizu8

    wow thank you for the review ^^

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    Snow White and the Seven Gods
    Urban · coffeescreameclair
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to Maxamed_Maxamuud_1115

    I help you with what?

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    Snow White and the Seven Gods
    Urban · coffeescreameclair
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Posted

    My pleasure if you'd give this novel a chance. OBSESSIVE STORYTELLER'S THESIS (or AMARYLLIS OF CRIMSON GABLES as I lovingly wrote it) is a story about Amaryllis Mendoza, an obsessive writer who unknowingly "merged" all the elements from the scripts she wrote into the real world. From a chance encounter while strolling in Kyoto, she meets Yotsuba Yazawa, the protagonist of the novel she's drafting and having problems due to mental block, and the rest: they engage in a heartening conversation─unprecedented for two people suddenly knowing they’re creators and creation. Precaution: 1 - From the popular Webnovel sub-genre, I've only read Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint and the plot is far from it: I expect other novels such as The Author’s POV and the The Extra’s Survival are different. The novel draws more inspiration from Japanese light novels and manga, mostly those which tackles the life of creators such as Bakuman and Oshi no Ko. 2 - I model my writing style most prominently after Nisio Isin, the author of Monogatari Series: but I don’t blatantly assume his techniques and sensibilities as I have mine. 3 - I don’t have problems with being compared and thrashed negatively as an effect, but I’ll only take you seriously when you know what you’re talking about. Chances are I’d completely ignore you or shallowly thank you for pointing out such a superficial observation devoid of research.

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    Amaryllis of Crimson Gables (Discontinued)
    Urban · coffeescreameclair
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to Shimizu8

    Thank you, I hope you continue reading the story ^^

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    Amaryllis of Crimson Gables (Discontinued)
    Urban · coffeescreameclair
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Commented

    hahaha true... I want one where I can hole myself for the rest of my life.

    With that money I will be able to gather resources to create my own secret base because who doesn't want there own secret base. I also need to get as many skills as possible and find a way to evolve my Great Sage because I can't get a hero or demon lord seed right now.
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    Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
    Fantasy · Neo_Acer
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to Shimizu8

    Dude, you're really tracking them... I hope you can identify all of them ^^

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    Amaryllis of Crimson Gables (Discontinued)
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to Shimizu8

    Thank you for pointing out. I'll attend to it as soon as I can.

    "You were the one who provoked him." Nagisa was sure to reprimand, but in utter complacence followed with a soft-spoken scold, "he just wanted to scold you if you were still trying to drag him along with us, as the covert operator. Planning to use him for you to lead a laid-back life on the assignment, it wouldn't get through. And it defeats the purpose of an assignment, yes?"
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    Amaryllis of Crimson Gables (Discontinued)
    Urban · coffeescreameclair
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to Shimizu8

    Yes, why not?

    Upfront, the premise was that the butterflies reigned supreme─and humans are shackled in their world established partly from the thoughts of Lovecraft. You get flying harmless creatures instead of the Great Old One─but receive the same cosmic horror helplessness.
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    Amaryllis of Crimson Gables (Discontinued)
    Urban · coffeescreameclair
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to Shimizu8

    Oh I know that one. Mine was coincidence but I like that concept.

    Everyone, including me, are mere artificial units cultivated to be used in the world over, for reasons I have insufficient knowledge. Although it's to say I know the concept isn't unfamiliar. Queasy to tell, conspiracies were, and are still being, documented across the globe. And more sickeningly, it was the premise of the web novel I was writing for the time.
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    Amaryllis of Crimson Gables (Discontinued)
    Urban · coffeescreameclair
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to Shimizu8

    that's better. thanks!

    Living along Kyoto, or presumably in any part of Japan, for a Filipino student was hard, coping with the culture and all. But the difficult necessity I had to pursue and cope with was interrupted by the encounter of an unlikely character, scarce from any preparation that I was taken captive in its insanity.
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    Amaryllis of Crimson Gables (Discontinued)
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to Shimizu8

    then let me see you try ^^

    "Nothing beats wanting to see an extraterrestrial starfish rampaging around but let's not hook normal people into your dreams," Nagisa readily refuted and said for a sensible insult, "You're unbecoming."
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    Amaryllis of Crimson Gables (Discontinued)
    Urban · coffeescreameclair
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Commented

    me too... never a dull moment

    I want an exciting life.
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    The Extra's Dominance
    Fantasy · Drei05
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Commented

    that was quite literally a boom

    -Boom
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    Everyone Else Has a System
    Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to shinka

    Also, you didn't finish your damn review. What about "when they are mentioned to be the shichifukujin"?!

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    Snow White and the Seven Gods
    Urban · coffeescreameclair
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  • coffeescreameclair
    coffeescreameclair1yr
    Replied to shinka

    What's with the GIF choice?!!! Thank you though

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    Snow White and the Seven Gods
    Urban · coffeescreameclair
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