Tiaxotrax

Started reading this one because it was the freebie of the day. It’s well written, great pacing, well thought out. And the mc has actual thought behind how he chooses to operate. So far I’m at chapter 55. And I have to say I’m very happy with the level of background character chatter. There hasn’t been multiple chapters of random names commenting on the mc actions. There hasn’t been stupid commenters analyzing actions play by play like an amateur sports announcer. It’s a great book a concept that has been tried by others but over all it seems to be working much better than other avatar/clone novels.

I hope Terrance goes after Claire and the spirit eviscerates him.

Chapters 1-32 are great. Minor spelling mistakes and such but readable and enjoyable. Chapter 33-38 are repeated chapters of chapter 32. Not sure what happened but hope it gets fixed.

My guess pseudo core or half-step core

This seems like a fun book. Into the library it goes.

It’s like chapter 10 got rewritten (still missing parts who the hell are the pkers and when did he start cooking. Maybe a new chapter 10 will appear that explains what happened between 9 and 11.

The writing and chapters are great I did not notice enough proofreading errors to distract from the story at all and I believe the story has great potential. I do have a few complaints. Mc gets first class skill at level 3 when others don’t get their skill till level 5. As of level 230 the mc is still one shorting every beast he encounters and still has only his first skill and 2 additional skills he purchased books for at level 10. Approaching 200 chapters (several tournament arcs) and 0 character skill change. Only difference in lvl 3 and 230 is bigger stats and 4 weapon changes. I feel this is quite a bit of fluff and not a lot of substance.