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I am also curious. Run seems a little underpowered considering in the first chapter you mentioned his dad taught him. if his dad taught him when he was younger he should be able to pretty much one shot everything up to the alabasta arc at least. other than that this honestly is a great story so far keep up the good work. this isn't meant as a negative review by the way its your story and it is good the way it is
I think you should have him go and revive those that have died and make an all female pirate crew with him as captain. he needs to grab nojiko when he revives bellmere make bellmere the navigator and nojiko the sniper go revive kuina for his swordwoman nab makino as a cook and get kaya for his doctor and pickup a broken hearted alvida after luffy practically ignores her in lougetown
I would say no to more naruto characters mainly because I feel if it were to happen Yamamoto or central 46 would want them dead because of their outrageous abilities. And the retsu unohana and so fon would be a good idea but just then obito has suffered untold amounts first lost his first love and practically brainwashed to try to destroy the world and commit many atrocities so he needs some extra love. and for his zanpaktou shikai make it like kakashi's chakra saber with abilities similar to zangetsu as a remembrance to his best friend. and his bankai should be something similar to his juubi mode but not the exact same like make him a partial bijuu with tails like a kajune from Tokyo ghoul