man I always love it when i see the blue dot next to your book always makes my day!!

to get your jollies off by tormenting a little boy with hope and then cruelly snatching it away? all jokes aside tho it is good but man I hope you have a way of making Harry stronger for the fights against grindy and dumby cuz the way you have shown them, no one has been capable of restraining them except each other and if you don't make the payoff worth it, it might ruin the entire premise

so the whole thing has now become a wank fest to make mc feel great? no challenges no struggles not thing at all? just coasting along until end which God only knows when it will come sigh 😔😔

congratulations man!!! am so happy for you!! wish you, your wife and your kid all the blessings and happiness in the world!!

amazing chapter ma man And I am getting somemanofsteel Kryptonian world engine vibes!!

absolutely man take that hiatuswe will all be right here waitingand in the meanwhile if you want to share some of those sweet sweet other stories........... well you won't find us complaining!![img=recommend]

thought is ok I am just confused cuz the way you described it felt like ketki did everything u described in a single day which just does not seem possibleand the way u have been writing the past few chapters feel very roboticsomething like this- " Robert woke up. Robert cooked food, Robert went to office his boss praised him for work well done, Robert came home played on his switch then he went out to eat food. he met his friend there.Robert- hello friend how are you Friend- i am ok Robert how are youRobert - i .friend i am going for dinner now bye friendFriend- yes of course Robert goodnight and bye then Robert went home and went to sleep"i am getting something like this vibes for past few chapterssorry if i am not able to articulate well but if u need to check check your begining chapters (20s and 30s) and read now ones I think you might understand my point

why the heck do all the recent chapters read like a quest book ⁉️ like seriously doesn't it feel like literally everyone including side and main characters are not people but just npcs in a indie rpg game or something?or is it just me?

so basically nothing happened in this chapter?and you need to work on your delivery style man half the time I was convinced ki the raids were happening in two different places or you were doing some before after scenes

so again after more than a week of waiting a whole lot and of nothing happened with half of chapter being his status (including system stats)and other half being small talk

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awesome fic 10/10 recommended. author truly highlights the main issues i have with the mc and fml and seriously i felt so bad for zhu zhuqing like here she was having come after surviving who knows how much torture (mental if not physical) from her sister with little to no support in hopes of finding that her fiancee is traing harder to ensure their survival and hoping he is still missing her as much as she missed him but nope surprise mofo i am walking round the town with the bit**es!!!! and she STILL got back with him cuz no way in hell would perfect tabg san's fantasy immersive life be broken with actual drama and geniune anger no sir stuff like that is illegal!! so hope our fav catgirl gets some much needed loving in this fic man! so anyway sorry for the long ass rant about a character instead of reviewing properly but still fic is absolute banger and is absolutely a good read for those who dont wanna see yet another mc lick san bro's boots to get his scraps!

An awesome fanfic of the soul land 1 series with a really interesting premise.the dynamic between Bibi dong and ah Li is very cool to watch especially when she loses her shit regarding the terrible duo. all in all an amazing underrated read which deserves more attention10/10 recommend!

ya gotta be there to see here

preach bro preachfelt very uncomfortable tried skipping to how it became like this but almost all was smit so just mostly skipped myself

Really Awesome Fic!!!! Really Awesome Fic!!!! Really Awesome Fic!!!! Really Awesome Fic!!!! Really Awesome Fic!!!! Really Awesome Fic!!!! Really Awesome Fic!!!! Really Awesome Fic!!!! Really Awesome Fic!!!! Really Awesome Fic!!!! Really Awesome Fic!!!!

an absolute banger of a novel where the author knows how to construct a story, character and world author has done his best and mostly succeeded in ensuring that even though the mc looks like a gigachad he is still a weeb at heart which I feel many authors either forget or feel is too cringe but to me, it's what makes a character so relatable, ki yes this is how I too would behave in front of these people and it warms my cynical fanfic heart to see such an underrated masterpiece.take your crown king u deserve it 👑👑

my only recommendation is PLEASE end this arc alreadyi get it intelligence woo hoo *inappriopriate moaning* but please for the love of God end this already my guyit would look better if it FELT like a chase of one person countering other then the other countering the first in increasingly over the top displays like with light and lbut here most of the time it seems like riddle does something and then Harry is left picking up the piecesthis all would have been much more palatble if u had given ur guy a year or two more to u know get on a somewhat level playing fieldas is with so much against him all this really does is make the mc look extremely incompetent and that's not even the worst of itwith how u r portraying dairymort makes readers wonder if he is so f ing intelligent *inappropriate moaning again* why the heck didn't he already conquer the world using his witif he is so cautious shouldn't he have researched the pros and cons BEFORE making horcruxesand I know u might give excuse that it is CANONi don't care if u can change story to show riddle vastly more intelligent than portrayed in cannon u should be ready to tackle the issues that bringsin cannon diarymort was an emotional wreck who while cumning was also very emotional and arrogant which is the main reason why he underestimated Harry so much and this paid the price

yes!!!!