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Harry potter
MC can be prideful but in this he is egoistic which do not be suitable to MC it has no difference between original novel and this one except sharingan, it like repeating novel author, in the original due to MC being egoistic and telling "I am the one who did it", he caused many problems than solving in simple effective manner and leading to his friends & family in pain, so I hope u can consider and improve
man I feel like MC is noob. how can a CIA agent think like this. it is like school children with new toys to play, where is the calculative and intelligent aspect of MC. Although he maybe new to world but as it is new he must be more cautious and he threw rock towards a populated area, is it joke a MC who saved the world think cheep of other lives.
f***k author MC is child or what he has aged more than 20 years in previous life now he thinks like I don't care are you dumb to write a novel, at least erase his previous memories if u want write or act like child to save his mother. And it took him 4yrs to know where he lives its practically or imaginary absurd. even a child will know where he lives after 3yrs at least tell town name he lives. u r making a story into tragic events or dark events at least have some input to MC who is martial artist in previous life who trained will not have such sloppy reaction and thinking