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Dropped at Ch. 80; The writing is just too childish for me to continue. A few examples: 1. There was a meeting with the board of directors and the chief security Inspector. The Inspector was clearly bullied into admitting that there was nothing wrong with the new designs of the VR Helmet and then killed on the same day as soon as he left the office (on orders of the chairwoman who publicly bullied him in front of other directors). Like what? How can you just bully someone like that in front of the entire board of directors and the directors do nothing about it? And do you seriously expect a bunch of grown men (the board of directors) to believe that the death was just a coincidence? 2. The MC is just slow. Below average intellect compared to normal people. Many examples of that will be seen throughout the novel. 3. He's holding some girl's throat in a PVP match and negotiating with her on why he shouldn't kill her? Dude there are a 1000 participants and only 500 can make it through the next round. Why negotiate? Just kill her and move on. Also the MC doesn't seem to be killing players as if this is real life or something. Like dude it's a game and the format is battle royale. Just kill sigh... 4. I dropped it when he got taken advantage of by his group and he stupidly signed a contract saying he owes them a favor. Again, I know for a fact that in the future he'll benefit from all these favors (I don't need to read to know this obvious cliche) but in real life, this is not how things work. You shouldn't just casually promise people favors. He was the top 1% of a vast multiplayer game. People who can achieve such a thing are not fools or pushovers. He was the strongest person in the group and he gave them a decent deal. Worst case, he could've just said no and killed the most wolves and later sold the cores to exchange for the cores he wanted. But this kind of stupid favor-owning nonsense doesn't make sense. 5. Enemies are illogical. Some rich young master comes and asks his thugs to beat this guy for some gaming equipment - like what?? Where does this happen? In a world where technology is so advanced, this kind of behaviour would be absolutely unacceptable. The MC doesn't even put forward a police complaint. And again, I am 99% sure the guy who saved him from getting beat up is the mysterious #1 player. Oh well anyways, just too many things that don't make sense for me to continue.

Dropping it at ch 146. The MC is way too gullible for me to continue reading. I was hoping for some development but nope. Nothing. I mean, just think for a second that you get "God"-level talent. The person should be excited, scared, and EMOTIONAL! But our MC here feels absolutely nothing. It's like the guy is brain-dead or something. Even after figuring out he can make $25k in less than a month, he doesn't realize the gravity of what's at stake and keeps asking questions with an unbelievable amount of naivety. He's like a little baby who's just the most innocent, pure soul out there. And somehow still alive...

One of the worst novels - and plagarized. Can't believe this is legel. Don't bother wasting your time reading this. Heed my advice and scram.

what kinda noble wears stinking clothes while attending a royal dinner... Please dont throw basic common sense out of the reason just cuz it’s a fantasy novel :/