EcchiKamiSama
Garbage human being and an all around piece of worthless shit. Still love myself for who I am.
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EcchiKamiSama5mthReplied to ElPadreof course not why do you think Naruto had a hard childhood
"I hope so," said Takuma. "So… that's the jinchuriki, huh."- EcchiKamiSama5mthCommented
I have more so a problem that this feels like someone put shackles on the MC growth. it was starting to get rolling and was smooth then someone but brakes on it. Either during the war he comes out on top stronger, achieves what he wants and then some. Or else looking back this plot point would feel like a pace breaker.
Ch 165 CH_5.22 (165) - EcchiKamiSama7mthPosted
I would like to give it 5 stars but as many have complained it is a slow burn. I like slow burn but many of the text and chapters could be removed and the pacing would be better. The Konoha background and common ninja pov is the thing that holds, elevates it above the rest of the fan fic. Heck I don't even care for fighting in the fan fic much. I care for the character growth and seeing more pov of the world view from MC. The biggest warning and advice I can give is, if after the slow burn growth happens, make sure that aspect of the MC never reverts back to his original self. Also use more of his previous life wisdom, that means widsom and intelect. He is different and can see the world from an outsiders point of view. Common sense to the Konoha Ninja can be different to a person who has already lived and died once in another world. A person reborn in a space age would look at Naruto world differently than a person reborn from ancient times.
- EcchiKamiSama7mthCommented
Always the better choice for fan fics, Hufflepuff is the second choice.
"RAVENCLAW!" Then announced the hat in response as applause burst out from the table. - EcchiKamiSama7mthReplied to SungJinMori
Yeah might be a personality being born due to insecurities inside him. Though he needs one win one win to be lifted up.
'You are weak,' said a voice in his head. - EcchiKamiSama7mthCommented
A legendary character for anyone writing a ordinary guy Naruto Fan Fic
"This humble one goes by the name Kosuke Maruboshi," said Murboshi and then looked at Takuma expectantly. - EcchiKamiSama7mthCommented
Rice, Egg with some sauces and spices. Tasty good food for cheap. If you want meat I would say buy from a restaurant pack and use your own rice. Or go to the hidden divine ramen shop in Konoha.
He smiled bitterly. Just like his housing situation, his financial situation looked dire and decrepit. He was provided an allowance every month, but it was only barely enough to cover his meals, which Takuma prioritized over everything else. He wanted to put some muscle and fat on his bones, and it took nutritious meals to accomplish that. He couldn't even eat out as it wrecked his budget, and he had to cook every meal in-house, which was a problem as he didn't know how to cook. He had gone to the academy and public libraries to get recipe books and created the cheapest three-meal menu he repeated daily. Every night, he would cook three meals in meal-prep form, put two in the fridge and eat the third. Take the breakfast out after the morning workout and take lunch with him to the academy. - EcchiKamiSama7mthCommented
This explains much better than what Kishimoto presented in the manga. The first chapter was like a self contained one shot but the second chapter was the true beginning.
"...The graduation test is done thrice in the last six months of the program," Kibe continued. "Passing any one of the three tests will see you passing graduation. But I want all of you to do your best in every test, even if you do pass the first time, because your best grade will be considered in the end, and scoring high is important without me needing to tell... because this is a test. The most important test of your life till now." - EcchiKamiSama7mthCommented
Now that is the Chinese tiger mothers I hear about.
His mother crafted a timetable for him, meticulously noting every detail on the blackboard covering the wall. His life, from age three to thirty, was planned out – from studies to friends, from meals to extracurricular activities. Everything was laid out on that timetable, clear as day. Standing in front of the blackboard, he felt as though he could peer into the endpoint of life. - EcchiKamiSama10mthReplied to Vernable_Reviewer
Dip his toes into all of them and be a master in one of them, that is the way for a Jonin.
He followed it up with various other possibilities like Assault ninja, Tracking ninja, Sensor ninja, Hunter-nin, Infiltration ninja, Communication ninja and so on. He explained the benefits of each and every one of them as well as their restrictions and limitations as well as the risks associated. He also gave a good role model for each option. - EcchiKamiSama10mthCommented
There are other people surviving, though wars and letting them be with the population would make the bloodline diluted but they would still survive not the OG pure bloodline. Senju certainly has elders of the clan hidden somewhere waiting for Tsunade to come back to Konoha.
The class had 30 kids. Apparently there were 2 Uchiha, 3 Hyuga, 2 each from Nara, Yamanaka and Akimichi, 3 Inuzuka, 1 Aburame, 1 each from Sarutobi, Shimura, Kato and Hatake clans and surprisingly 3 from Senju and 2 from Kurama clan. Other 6, including Fujin, were normal civilians. - EcchiKamiSama10mthCommented
Am I wrong in remembering that he was first only in a combat test rather than the written test. Sakura was first in theory, Sasuke first in combat and Naruto last in IQ.
Sasuke who wasn't very much interested in the class looked at Menma and thought 'Humph! Reading is for weak people. If I can simply train to become stronger, why would I waste my time?' - EcchiKamiSama3yrReplied to Winters_Rain
I would not want more Korean Novels on this site as they would basically do what they did to the Chinese market. Some novels will get translated but others will be left of to die as their translation rights are bought so good luck if it doesn't get picked. Also yes give us more money while we hold your novel by gunpoint. That other site that should not be named does Korean novels and the authors should go there for translation.