RoyalDerp
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RoyalDerp2yrReplied to RoyalDerpCh 147 Chapter 145: Battle ends.- RoyalDerp2yrCommentedCh 147 Chapter 145: Battle ends.
- RoyalDerp3yrReplied to RoyalDerp
Or instead of sharp, use whatever descriptive word you feel is appropriate, like blunt, quaking, whatever you feel would be best.
Suddenly, a sudden pain blossomed on the sides of my head 'I probably hit my head on a stone or something. Then my head cleared as I started discerning what was going on around me. - RoyalDerp3yrCommented
"Suddenly, a sudden pain blossomed". I feel it would be better to say "Suddenly, a sharp pain blossomed". I feel saying the word sudden twice is a bit redundant, to me at least.
Suddenly, a sudden pain blossomed on the sides of my head 'I probably hit my head on a stone or something. Then my head cleared as I started discerning what was going on around me. - RoyalDerp3yrReplied to Haymore
Ah yes, the eternal struggle of immortals with a death wish and the blacksmith's creations that shan't let them die.
The healers continued to bait and mock their charges all the way back to the gates where the immortals moved toward the foundries established just inside where their armour could undergo an emergency refit. No doubt Smithant was already bashing the exhausted soldiers over the head with her hammer, lamenting the damage done to her precious armour. The moniker 'immortals' had run amazingly true over the duration of the siege, only a single member had perished in the fighting so far. The others had been unsure whether to curse or praise their sister for her misfortune, but they had gathered for a solemn vigil as the soldier had been peeled from her armour and laid to rest. - RoyalDerp3yrReplied to Geee
yup, seems like people might just be getting more free time to write them probably
Trouble at the Docks! - RoyalDerp3yrCommentedCh 90 Trouble at the Docks!
- RoyalDerp3yrReplied to christianwah92Ch 547 The Siege pt 5
- RoyalDerp3yrReplied to RoyalDerpCh 11 Sleeping Works
- RoyalDerp3yrCommentedCh 538 Under the sea
- RoyalDerp3yrReplied to RoyalDerpCh 5 The benevolent duo