so far, i find it interesting. i tend to be curious of how the flow of the story would be. im just starting but the way the sequences showing where will it leads me happened to make me stuck into it. yes , some words are confusing for slight changes as it was written but i managed to cope with those. im beginning to like what the writer tend to imply, well, hope im right on my perspective. Kudos to the writer . keep it up and keep on adding spices on your stories. not all readers can accept or can give positive comments. listen to their opinions , visualize it if you find it fair enough. criticism not always bad. stay focus and be inspired.