Lady_Wolvie

This story drew me in straight away. I like that Shen yuan finds ways around changing the script without being OOC. The commentary while being straight faced is hilariously done.

I Really enjoy this story But it is a litter choppy

Happing oR happening?

Whole oR hole?

Paste? Or past?

This is epic in hos own way to get what he wants without be too powerful straight Away he still needs to work for it by doing missions etc

HaVe patience?

Killing two birds with one stone is the Original quote that i think you are using

Here here

Loved this story was a little stranGe at times and The though process of mc was a bit scatTered but still very enjoyable all up.