Monsterben
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Same Story, so nothing there to see, just a minor change.
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Good, Continue it.
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You need to write your own.
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Well, good till now, and the simulation to other world was even more amazing.
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good till now
Edward, the Prime Minister, sought clarification in the midst of this tense atmosphere. "Is there a particular reason for our response? Has the Somtar Kingdom been involved in this?" His voice, tinged with concern, cut through the air thick with uncertainty. - Monsterben3mthCommented
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Elarion and Celestia continued their passage, inspecting the various aspects of their Kingdom. Some Elves were involved in crafting eco-friendly technology. They had recently made a remarkable invention: a green, air-powered bike that could fly, run, and even swim. With it their traveling to a long journey has been solved. - Monsterben3mthCommented
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On a quiet morning, Elf King Elarion, and his wife, Elf Queen Celestia, were touring their Sylvarion Kingdom. They gazed upon the tranquil society where some Elves were busy enhancing their tree-homes' beauty. "Long Live My King, My Queen," echoed through the air as the people bowed in reverence upon the royal couple's arrival. - Monsterben3mthCommented
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Then the scene moves towards the one of the branch of Universal Tree. The branch was so beautiful, it had cosmic lights all over it. And the design on the branch was showing a Dragon, Phoenix, Tiger, Lion, Roc, many of the magical beasts were shown on the branch. - Monsterben3mthCommented
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There was a big tree showing, all branches and leaves were glowing. It was the Universal Tree, the tree has so many Universes. Each branch has one single Multiverse, while each single leaf has one complete Universe. - Monsterben3mthCommented
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Five years swiftly passed since the day Azlan Starwind was officially declared the Crown Prince of Sylvarion Kingdom, and during this time, it had become an unspoken rule for anyone fortunate enough to meet Azlan to strive to bring joy to his bright and eager face. - Monsterben4mthCommented
NEED TO ADD, HOW SHOUD A WEDDING DONE
As the Christian priest announced the completion of the marriage ceremony, the couple exchanged a loving gaze and a tender kiss, sealing their commitment to each other.