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Everything….

Liked the story , short and interesting. Just would’ve liked to know more about Silas and if Lawrence family accepted him. Also, questioned whether Leo was also reincarnated but never said anything cause author always emphasized how he was mature and different from pre-reincarnation. Just needs a tad fixing with the pronouns in confusing the character. Other than that 👏.

Great story! The only reason I took off like a star was because at some point the nouns for the baby were confused: it’s a baby girl but the context and the nouns made it sound like a baby boy. It’s ok, still an awesome book. It’s a love story , not too much drama -it’s the story of going to simplicity . Loving someone , spending your days together , raising kids and finding rhythm to everyday life. Really liked how the author gave the extra story of their kids , and how main couple spent their days in the underworld. Tears were shed, but worth it 👏

Author you threw this at me, whyyyy 😭

Welp I started reading when it was completed. Really enjoyed the story. Liked how it didn’t have additional conflicts that unnecessarily made the story longer. But whyyyy author did you end it with the Jiang Xingye from the og book. 😭. Living a life knowing there’s another one filled with joy and love. The ending just left me depressed for the og Jiang Xingye .

The baby sprouts waiting

What if he was the enemy from within. That’s why he’s in a coma, so that once he “revives” we’ll get golden nuggets to figuring out who was the enemy from the empire that the fml is from.

The forshadowing 👀.

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza