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tmoedoey1yrCommentedwho dafuq pays to join the military shouldn't be the other way around?!? Marine combat vet here... you get paid to attend ocs officer candidate school
"OK, letās do this. Remember to transfer me the money first. I am so poor now that I donāt even have ten thousand in my account." Han Sen was telling the truth as he had less than ten thousand after paying his own tuition and fees.- tmoedoey1yrCommented
I feel like it's been a hundred chapters and he hasn't learned the first simple spell
The revelations about the chaos element also filled his mind with doubts. Liiza believed that the human approach to the Wave spell was dumb, but she couldn't help him develop a new method either. She even felt that Khan shouldn't test his luck right away due to how he had treated his mana until then. After all, a single failed attempt might really make him explode. - tmoedoey1yrCommented
just curious as to why 10000 people are need to farm an area a third of a mile if they are supposed to be stronger than the average human? can 10000 people even fit on such a small plot of land? if it takes 4 laps around the average high school field track to make a mile and 100 hectares is - .38 of a mile that means it's slightly bigger than the average high school football field......
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why all the non commissioned officers? seems like alot of chiefs but not that many "Indians"
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that's a weird onamonapia to use why not "Wapah Wapah skadooooshhh"š¤£š¤£š¤£
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whole heartedly agree to many stories with plot holes
Honestly, I wouldn't say I like these types of development. For me, each rule created is inviolable. It cannot be circumvented to satisfy the MC's wishes. Of course, the author can create alternatives, but this must be done from the beginning, leaving a gap that allows this without a hole formed in the story. - tmoedoey2yrCommented
this must be china thinking
Another student added on, "Private-owned training bases cost 20 Alliance Credits for a week of training. The government's price is already more than fair. Also, does capturing monsters not take time and energy? Does building a training base not require manpower and money? Do you think the government owes you?" - tmoedoey2yrCommented
lemme guess... somewhere in the seven realms maybe?
While this type of trap may be dangerous to the vast majority of players, it was not a problem for Izroth who had personally experienced places many times more life-threatening than this tunnel. - tmoedoey2yrCommented
it's his nindo his ninja way
Normally, novices and apprentices have only vaguely heard about design philosophy. From their basic textbooks, design philosophy embodied a mech designer's understanding of mech design and signified their unique insights that no one else could imitate. - tmoedoey2yrCommented
getting close to dropping this
Price: 10,000 Design Points - tmoedoey2yrCommented
doesn't this guy have level 2 in metallurgy? shouldn't he be better than the bot?
Though Ves lacked the expertise to fully utilize the lab, he handed off the chunk of mineral to the lab's expensive lab bot. While it was fairly stupid compared to a human scientist, it was better than nothing. With the ore in its hands, the bot should be able to find out a couple of things about the ore. - tmoedoey2yrCommented
it seems to that the money in the republic has no real value unless each credit is equivalent to a penny how tf is anything $500m's the only thing I can think of is that bright credits were literally printed out with out anything backing it (like the us dollar is supposedly back by gold) which drove inflation through the effing roof
Ves had checked the price of a 10-year Caesar Augustus production license shortly after he first got it. Such prices weren't made public, so he had to visit a couple of mech fan sites to find a couple of estimates. The license's price supposedly ranged from 500 million to up to 2 billion bright credits. - tmoedoey2yrCommented
Does he offer medical insurance or 401k
"No." Roland stepped forward, wrapped his coat around her, and said with a forcedly gentle tone, "Miss Anna, I want to hire you." - tmoedoey2yrCommented
damn this was a very good read up until this pointš¤š¤š¤ if he doesn't get smarter soon... I'm dropping it
'I'll kill you!' William screamed internally as he rushed towards the Magic Division. The moment Isaac attacked Wendy, the system immediately informed William of what was happening.Ā - tmoedoey2yrCommented
Finish Him dun dun dun FATALITY
It fell to the ground, shattering into countless shards of bone, skin, and brain matter. - tmoedoey3yrPosted
I really like the plot. These kind of stories just so happens to be my cup of tea. its just hard to read. The obvious grammatical errors can be overlooked but for me, it's the flow of the story that bothers me. The story seems either rushed or forced in just the first chapter. my advice; slow it down a little some to describe the settings or wut the characters look, but keep up the good work šš if you keep writing I'll keep reading.
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I'm getting book of eli vibes š¤£š¤£š¤£
Han Xiao followed behind Hu Xuan Jun into the tent. An was a woman who looked rather ordinary and wore a simple waist skirt. Han Xiao noticed that she was blind. - tmoedoey3yrReplied to XTREMEOof
yes... yes I would
After considering all the benefits of being her servant, he could not help but feel like this is a win-win situation. As long as she does not make him do anything sexual, he will try and endure it biding his time. - tmoedoey3yrCommented
y does a private (the lowest possible military rank) have access to someone personal files
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yeah that'll teach them š¤£š¤£š¤£
āInstruct someone purchase Light Stones immediately! Buy as many as you can! I donāt believe that they have an unlimited supply!ā Feng Xuanyang commanded furiously.