DarkPreacher001
A writer only begins a book. A reader finishes it - I copied the quote from google and I am not sorry.
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DarkPreacher0011yrCommentedNext is Horizon-style interrogation
"I promise I'll release what's left of you when I get what I want," Law says, words barely heard through Skeptic's screaming. "But let's see how many pieces I have to take until we get there..."- DarkPreacher0011yrCommentedCompletely oblivious that their fate just took a turn for the worse...
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Bringing out the nature of the MC. the character building up to this point for HORIZON is PERFECT.
What do you think of the story thus far? - DarkPreacher0011yrCommented
You have referenced worm at least five times since the beginning. I get, you are a FAN
I will call them Link, Nazi and Neo respectfully, as I didn't pay attention to their names and the first is the weak link, the second is aryan and the third looks like how I'd imagine the E88 Neo-Nazi's would look. - DarkPreacher0011yrCommented
same here.....i haven't read worm, not completely atleast. Just 1/4 rth of the novel, rest of the story and plot through fanfics....
I'm not really bothered, I've never actually watched Naruto, I only ever read fanfics based on it, so my knowledge of canon is pretty much non-existent, so rather than worrying about the butterfly effect I'm just going to do what I want and ignore that there's supposed to be a plot. - DarkPreacher0011yrCommented
Author would have completely stopped at cm and kg, but then he remembered MURICA......
Horizon was now standing at 194cm -6ft4- and 260lbs -118kg-, completely filled out with muscles, all exaggerated by the design of his body glove, a terrifyingly imposing figure. - DarkPreacher0011yrCommented
It took me 10 secs to understand that. Thank god I was not one of those idiots who need to open the comment section to understand that.
Distinct Green- Double Middle - DarkPreacher0011yrCommented
what is the purpose of Haki-coated gauntlets? If it was a sword, then there may have been some use.....
"Sorry if I went too hard, sparring with Garp so often somewhat skewed my expectations for others as well..." Enel said as the blackened gold gauntlets he wore didn't even seem to have a dent on them. - DarkPreacher0011yrCommented
Where have I seen this???? Ahh.... a survival crafting game.
By the end of fifth month of my arrival at Planetos, I had managed to reach level 45. I had mined and smelted around three hundred iron ingots, hundred aluminium ingots, seventy copper ingots, twenty tin ingots and seven chromium ingots. - DarkPreacher0012yrCommented
okay...this para I used too much 'careful'. now that I look at it, looks clumsy too. My bad. I would like readers to point out any cringy paragraphs too.
Even though he was anxious, he was very careful. He was very careful for the whole day without dropping his act. If some mistake happened, then all his efforts will be in vain. So he has to be very careful. - DarkPreacher0012yrCommented"His wings are from mana. He doesn't need to flap them to fly. Besides, he can detach feathers and control them from a distance." I explained.
- DarkPreacher0012yrReplied to Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bro you are asking me to portray Harry as Voldemort just because he has the Dark lord's memories. And he can't become OP in one chapter or paragraph too. I want Harry to be a little bit like Dumbledore, manipulative but just. Developing a character is proving to be difficult for me. A limited number of chapters are needed to justify the development. 1. Yes, will travel around the world. 2. Nope 3. He will take an active role to mingle with the population. 4. Definitely enjoy.
- DarkPreacher0012yrReplied to Kiloreee
During his fifth year in academy
A : I dono…..we have nano, it can decipher all that DNA and shit. You guys comment on it, whether Naruto would need a dojutsu or not. - DarkPreacher0012yrCommented
No no no.....the mental picture must be Mitsuki Bakugo
I don't know what happened but my sadistic mind suddenly gave me a mental picture of Katsuki... - DarkPreacher0012yrReplied to SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
At least according to this fanfic
It is due to the Nara clan, the trio clans, Akimichi-Nara-Yamanaka hold some irrefutable power in the village. This power was slowly built from the beginning when the village was built. With the Uchiha clan eradicated, the Hyuga clan's dispossession clouded with their pride, Senju almost extinct and the birth of the Ino-Shika-Cho alliance in the previous generation slowly cemented their power in Konoha. - DarkPreacher0012yrReplied to
Yes...but only in Shikaku's generation, it started to take shape and amass power.
It is due to the Nara clan, the trio clans, Akimichi-Nara-Yamanaka hold some irrefutable power in the village. This power was slowly built from the beginning when the village was built. With the Uchiha clan eradicated, the Hyuga clan's dispossession clouded with their pride, Senju almost extinct and the birth of the Ino-Shika-Cho alliance in the previous generation slowly cemented their power in Konoha. - DarkPreacher0012yrCommented
For the Greater Good.
2. Harry potter will be a neutral character, an individualist who follows his own heart and generally shrinks rules and tradition. Only sometime after the story, he gets thrust into a bigger world, he sees the ugliness of the world. From there he becomes the domineering man who only cares about loyalty and order but not about freedom, dignity, or life. He will play by certain rules but without mercy or compassion. - DarkPreacher0012yrCommented
A powered down version of administrator shard - Skitter Jr or Weaver Jr
"Starting today, you all will be my eyes." - DarkPreacher0012yrReplied to KoroSensei14
I am not planning to do a year-long time-skips, just 4-6 months. 1. His sensing will get to the level of Kagura's mind eye, but will only come later 2. Fuinjutsu - Yes 3. Adamantine chains - If many readers insist, I would add it.
Ch 4 CHAPTER 4 : Naruto's Achievements