there was one line in the original Frankenstein book that called the creature Adam the book just did not use that name again.

I do not know about other places but where I am from the school system is set up like a prison And when I was in school you were even assigned a number to represent you instead of your name because it was more convenient for the teachers.

it says man but later on calls him a her

the story is not bad but I do find that even though the Mc is 4 he thinks he is a adult because at 4 people do not care how attractive they are due to lack of hormones. the other thing is he seems to think that he can run off on his own and survive without the thought of how people will react to a 4 year old living by themselves or even going anywhere by themselves.

if the criminal was eliminated then how would they pay for bail or any fines plus repeat offenders are a bonus because they keep coming back to pay more.

I do not get why authors almost always when they talk about earth make it like where they live is all of earth and the earth is the same everywhere. there are someplaces on earth where nevermind kicking you out of the orphanage at thirteen they will enslave you instead before you even see a orphanage.

what do you mean morals of earth. earth has no set morals diffrent people on earth have different morals. people need to realize that one size does not fit all and it is the same when talking about the people of earth.

you can tell the Mc must have lived a very sheltered life

the story not bad from what I read but there are inconsistencies in the story like how the description before you read the story says the mc is a boy making it sound like he is a little kid even though he is 15 years old in the story. the ideas for this story is good just need to be better executed and thought through more.

this paragraph makes no sense because why would you wash off rain with more water and wouldn't drying off be a better solution.

it sound like a fake name to me

my advice to the author is not to do this because every book is gonna have hate no matter what you do. the best bet in my opinion is to just ignore them and write your story your way. when you respond like this you just get yourself worked up and the haters looking to find more falt with your book even more. it will even get some of your supporters riled up to protect the book

didn't he already get his coaching fee

he is being called a kid even though he is 25 years old? plus is it normal for people his age to still be looked after by their parents like they are a child. I know I have never heard of a 25 year old child that ran away from its parents on the news before.

why does it sound like he the boss of his mother and he can order her around.

most kings and queens treated their own people as slaves not just black people and most black slaves they got were from Africans selling their own people.

to me the main character does not fit the setting he has the personality and morals of a modern man but after living over a hundred years in a age where it is brutal and completely diffrent kind of morals he somehow acts more like a modern person.

th Mc is not arrogant otherwise he would have killed the person who called him a guard dog to satisfy his pride. I hate to say it but the author likes to make the Mc talk big but he does little.

here is a tip have your main character have more emotion because at times it is like a robot for example when he is up and realizes he is in Harry Potter it is like he acts to be expected that he is there no thing big happened. Also with the professor he says to the professor to prove magic is real she just does and he just goes with it like it is no big deal.

they can't beat Odin but they think they can beat the ones that did and proved to be stronger.