Write_and_Zen

VINCE

luckily the app still seems to work

lol

I think it came out weird but what I wanted to express was that his expectation was something cooler, like getting an OP skill but he only ended up with a lock-picking one, hence why he is disappointed and trying to convince himself that it's good enough!

here's the pic of the 'map' or drawing inside of the key

here's the picture of it opening-up

The key mentioned here is the key from the movie The Mummy

Um... I don't plan on letting anyone know about the system. But perhaps you mean the hidden item? I have yet to add the pictures but the hidden item he got here is the 'key' from the movie The Mummy ... and it's kind of deviating from the plot if he becomes an expert in Egyptian lost language and lore while solving crimes. I'll add the pictures now so hope that'll help...

I think so too, but I figure the problem with these types of novels with so many worlds pushed together is giving the MC too much power. When the MC is capable of being a Marvel hero, it won't make sense for him to investigate people like a detective when he can just beat the shit out of them. I have tried writing these sorts of novels (Building a Guild in a Fiction World using my Gamer System) in the past and I went through a similar problem hence the reason I dropped that one. So with this, I am trying to find a perfect balance between having power and having a reasonable progression through the plot where the character has stakes in the story and isn't just coasting through the story like a god. Anyway, that was a long ass reply lol, but I am glad you're enjoying it.

Yeah it's the movie I know what you did last summer