RedBeard73

The whole interaction with altar and Gray felt weird. He somehow instantly knows it’s Ultrar just because of a woman’s voice and she uses ice? And what is he so mad about in the first place?

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It’s Ms. Mrs. Is only for women who are married

All the other images won’t show up, can you repost them, or is there somewhere else we can find them?

Unless you already edited the synopsis, there is no misspelling, I’m betting they didn’t know “slating” was a real word.

It’s badly written, even for AI. Story feels super weird at times with dialogue not fitting into the plot or contradicting statements. Some parts are just copy and pasted into the story, usually from the anime like Tsuyu’s “your quirk is like All Mights” despite the fact that he doesn’t even have a quirk. Lots of other examples. Story is a collage of sections put together with AI, like a puzzle you forced pieces into the wrong spots. Dialogue also isn’t good, characters act weirdly and often differently from cannon, with Izuku being your run of the mill AI MC with little actual character who tries to act cool. The story is the epitome of AI slop

Review is from a bot account owned by the author, just saying

Grammar is genuinely some of the worst I’ve read on the site, I can’t believe something can be this badly written when there are so many different AI services that will help you improve your writing, even if you don’t use it to just write the story for you. Also author uses bot accounts for fake reviews, so automatically a 1 star anyway.

Some of the best ways to tell if a story is AI are if it: uses lots of short sentences, if it uses dashes like this (-), most writers never use them, so when you see a few of them in a story it’s AI 99% of the time. If the author structures multiple paragraphs by going “it’s not this, or this, but this” it’s AI. These are the best ways I’ve found to tell if something’s AI, but there are other methods too, just look for repeated patterns in the writing, real writers won’t repeat the same sentence and paragraph structure over and over again like AI will.