Alexandre_M

This is very good. In my opinion, this story is much better than the other. People who don't like drama / conflict don't seem to understand that this is what makes a good story last. If all the internal problems were already over, there would be nothing to report. I thought it was amazing that you managed to do this earth spirit thing in Kota, without looking like idiot, even becoming something credible. I hope to see more of your stories.

Great Chapter.

I'm in chapter 9.

I like the story, but it has a lot of problems. However, you shouldn't give up. It is best to practice. You really ran away from the same canonical stories that fanfics often repeat and this is very good. I like the fact that Mc values ​​food and even gives tips to ordinary people who don't hurt. For example, those pirates that he talked about haki. This may seem silly, but it is difficult to have on the webnovel. The only things that bothered me was the fact that he did not want to interact with any canonical character, at the same time that no strong relationship was built, be it loving or friendship. (The rabbit does not count, as it appeared in the last chapters) Finally, and perhaps what bothered me the most, was the fact that he wanted to be an adventurer, at the same time that he didn't mind attacking a navy ship ... Like , is basically treating all readers like idiots. I mean, I already imagined that this would happen, but I hoped I was wrong, and that you could find a solution. But in the end what I already imagined ended. The truth is that anyone who is incarnated and who knows One Piece should know that being an "Adventurer" in One Piece is practically impossible, as the government needs to tax the people who are on their side (the Navy) and those who are against them (pirates, revolutionaries and anyone who wants to BE FREE, and this means, "not being bound by rules set by the government.") Anyway, keep up the good work. And all the best for you.

I like both versions of your story, but I can't deny it, this is my favorite. The construction of the novel is much better constructed. You improved on some small details about Mc's relationship with Hiroshi Sato, which is good, because, honestly, there were some inconsistencies in the other story. The plot has more coherence in this than in the other. And as for the love relationship, I hope Kota has a relationship with Asami this time, instead of Korra. Regardless of your choice, it will look good anyway, but don't be discouraged in writing.

2000 stones. Chapter 65?

Amazing. You are an excellent writer. Character building, plot, humor, charisma. Everything is very good. And if by chance there are some stupid people who try to demean your writing method, type of narrative, etc., please do not be discouraged, and just ignore.

Don't mind that kind of person. This type of person only knows how to discredit the work and care of the authors. Continue with the excellent work. I'm enjoying it a lot, and I'm sure there are many like me. This story has a very high potential.

If Shanks and Whitebeard are fully aware of what happened in Wano. Their alliance with Jaw to kill Kaidou will be consistent. After that, they can divide Kaidou's territory among them. It is best for Jaw to do this before samurais's return. That way he will be able to take over the territory, and the other Yonkou won't care so much, but if they hear about Monosuke, they probably will. So it's better for Jaw to make the alliance and take down Kaido as soon as possible.

Thanks for the chapter. Just one question: will the extra chapter of the thousand stones still be released this afternoon?