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Heyy make sure to read my novel: A Kinetic Wielder's Fulfilling Adventure | Don't look at the other original works I wish I could delete them :sob:

2019-01-26 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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    omnivolent1yr
    Replied to Le_Samurai

    Emilia solos

    The two turned away from each other and got back to their chores. Asher was instructed to clean the house for the family gathering tonight while Emilia had to finish working on the decorations, and for some reason also clean her room albeit nobody was allowed in there apart from her. Asher refers it to as her 'nest' because of her feral behaviour when someone tries to go inside. Once she had almost drowned him for trying to enter which taught him that curiosity killed the cat.
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    omnivolent1yr
    Replied to YoJinsei19

    Thank you! <3

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    omnivolent1yr
    Replied to Kaelestia

    Yeah she's def not one to turn to anger but here Karlyle had messed up BAD

    Mimi shouted in response, how could her struggling trainee accept a quest without even talking to her about it first? Karlyle could barely write a message using the Arkana Network but now he thinks he knows how the quest function works?
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    omnivolent1yr
    Posted

    So far from what I've read I enjoy the story just kinda wish the pacing was more managed as some parts feel overly quick but overall greating writing. [img=recommend]

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    omnivolent1yr
    Replied to Kaelestia

    The wyvern is much more than just a creature...

    Ch 13 Enchark: A Forgotten Myth
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    omnivolent1yr
    Replied to StellaReads

    Thank you for the kind words Stella! ❤️

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    omnivolent1yr
    Replied to Kaelestia

    When the time is right, make sure to remember these types of scenes for once that backstory comes around.

    He did miss the heart apple pie though. The feeling of warmth and its enchanting aftertaste that was left behind made him crave it, especially after fighting Foster and only being able to taste blood and pain. Only after those fights did Karlyle find out what pain tastes like and it isn't great, he wouldn't recommend it.
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    omnivolent1yr
    Replied to Kaelestia

    Training with Mimi definitely helped him get better quickly

    Mimi nodded at Foster and he nodded back. Karlyle noticed the exchange and knew something was up. Now it wasn't one after another anymore, it was both of them coming for him at once. While protecting himself from Mimi's hits, he felt Foster sneak into his mind so he quickly pushed Mimi away, turned around, shot at Foster, and turned back around in time to continue parrying. Sure, at first this wasn't too hard to do but Karlyle's opponents made it progressively harder.
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    omnivolent1yr
    Posted

    As the author I obviously have a lot of good to say about my own work but as the readers I really hope you guys give this story a shot. The beginning of the story is a bit slow in pacing but by chapter 10 things start to get more dramatic and action like so I hope you stick around! [img=recommend]

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    omnivolent1yr
    Commented

    I love making Foster and Mimi act like they're raising Karlyle.

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    omnivolent1yr
    Replied to Kaelestia

    Thank you for enjoying it so far, chapter 2 soon! [img=recommend]

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