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I quite like the imagery used. However the dialogue is a bit lacking, nonetheless the way the scene is set makes up for that as it's easy to visualize and keeps your attention. I cannot say much about the story as it has not progressed enough but, I think it'll be a worthwhile read.

I mean it in the sense plum hasn’ been updating, plumothy is fine

plumothy why have you left us

I want an outsider pov, do the people see him as edgy??

ant capitalism slayyyyyyyy anyways the writing is very good, I enjoy the descriptions of the scenery a lot, easy to imagine Ash's surroundings. The clicheness of isekai is still strong here, but that doesnt mean overdone. If you want an isekai with an ant mc yolo

have you considered wattpad? I feel like the readers there would appreciate this more

I wonder why Xyver cannot still confess now that they're equal status, maybe he just respects her so much. If he does not want to disturb her already chaotic life, why not be a pillar of support?

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It's pretty good overall with an intriguing plot and the writing quality. I am quite fond of the little details, which make imagining the current scene easily, and gives a touch of movement and life to the characters.

YOU NEED MORE CLOUT THIS IS SO GOOD SO FAR UGHHHHH