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spiho1mthCommentedROFL! Poor moony really get the cramps on his period
We sat there in silence until Remus spoke up, "Did you really have to refer to my werewolf transformation as my 'Monthlies'?"- spiho4mthReplied to DunnoDKCh 53 Going All Out (2)
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Looks like mtl to be honest
do u guys like this translation? - spiho6mthReplied to Bowsmen
Probably translation difference
- Mr Rusard, the janitor, also asked me to remind you that it's forbidden to perform magic tricks in the corridors between classes. The selection of Quidditch players will take place during the second week. Those wishing to join the team should go and see Madame Bibine. Finally, I'd like to add that this year, access to the third-floor corridor is strictly forbidden, unless of course you want to die in excruciating agony. - spiho8mthCommented
I don’t remember him seeing moltres
Joyna's Latias was not yet fully grown, and its strength had not reached its peak. It was far from the legendary birds Yuga had seen before, such as Zapdos, Articuno, or Moltres. However, its strength was still at a Champion level. - spiho8mthCommented
Didn’t he already have rock type from archeops?
[ Reward: Universal Pokéblock formula for Rock-type Pokémon and Universal Pokéblock formula for Steel-type Pokémon. ] - spiho10mthCommented
What he did till now wasn’t diabolical enough? Just switching places with kiba was enough… to konoha who values teammates above all.. kakashi would refuse to be the sensei of such team. I like the story, but the actions of team 7 seems a bit much and a bit forced with no repercussions that should be there, or maybe it’s just me that feels so disgusted that I wish there was more punishment? Either way, nice story so far, keep going :)
A/N: In response to those who say they should just incapacitate Sasuke and use his sperm to impregnate a bunch of women. The whole idea of keeping him active is to show other villages that they still have an active Uchiha in their midst. Sure it may only be one, but just the stigma of the clan's bloodline acts as a deterrent. Now, if he does something truly diabolical, then they may consider him doing more harm then good by staying out in the open. At that time they may take actions against him. - spiho1yrReplied to THE_alpinism
The month after July is August…
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What is the purpose of the club? Just a study club? To gather minions? To form a group of influential individuals? His ultimate goal should help in giving it a name
I hope you can give me some suggestions for the name of the club, and things you hope to see him teach the members. - spiho1yrCommented
It took 9 chapters for 1 day… how can it be slower? I also like kingdom building, but with some time skip mixed in
The story will be slower-paced from now on, giving you readers time to process and fully understand everything - spiho1yrCommented
Divination 1 year?
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He lived 10k years in Naruto learning everything possible and you say akatsuki is going to cause him trouble… srly?
MC will definitely be OP once Hulk powers is combined with ninja powers that will make most villains child's play. Which is why the idea of bringing the Akatsuki and ultimately Madara to counter the balance the power in the world. Original MCU characters will be useless.? Wasn't there a hint of Bruce teaching Stark how to mold chakra? Now imagine ironman covered in lightning armour of raikage. Black widow using zabuza's silent killing. Dr strange using elemental attacks and thor being thor, uses darui's black lightning? won't original villains be overwhelmed? think about it, what else could possibly happen? - spiho1yrCommented
How can he begin magic training if the ancient one didn’t connect him with the dimensions in which he can draw the energy?
He may have failed, but the feeling of using magic for the first time was euphoric. Peter was worried that he wouldn't be capable of learning the mystic arts or that the Ancient One wouldn't allow it, but here he is about to open a magical portal. - spiho1yrReplied to CPMFCh 1 Stand-ins & Stunts
- spiho1yrCommentedCh 1 Stand-ins & Stunts
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This one was painful to read
God: no she does not know about it, now about the other villages, the mist will same go crises and reform under me Temari but it will happen fast this time when you and 4th Mizukage was assassinated under Zabuza so it comes forward and me Temari became 5th Mizukage and now cloud village or bastard village we both know why and 4th Raikage want to change the picture of the image So He gives the order this to hide it for public but upperclassmen of every know it about this order and now come to rock its same but they have arrogant because of killing 3rd Raikage which is strongest at an age at that time and suna is more desperate than other - spiho2yrCommented
If you bring another team and Naruto much more powerful than cannon it won’t make sense to kill her on wave
yes for wave. - spiho2yrCommented
Thanos is proud!
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You change POV like Voldemort change wands to kill Harry :) I was a little lost sometimes, story is good so far, if you specify the POV when u change them it would be great
I am not too pleased with this chapter, and will probably rewrite it at some point. I think i could benefit from more precise criticism, so be as generous and caustic as you want.