? When did I say I was a better writer than the author? Plus does everyone who have written a review for a story have to be authors themselves? Spam reviewing? But I only wrote one review? I wrote what I liked and disliked about the story and I even said "I'm dropping it but that doesn't mean that potential readers should, give it a chance maybe you'll like it more than I did". Giving a story a 1-3 star isn't that serious I don't really know why you're crying about my review when there reviews with a lower rating than mine. Also comparing both of our profiles maybe you should be the one to get a hobby.

I'm not gonna give a story that I think is 3/5 at best, a 5/5 and leave a "review" that says some random shit and then says "It's seriously good" at the end. You respond to the one line of my review but ignored everything else. Plus I like how you conveniently didn't respond to the plot holes or anything else really. If you read the review slowly and carefully then you would know why I wrote about a ranker attacking someone and not being punished by the guardian of the floor.

Writing Quality: Make no mistake, this is a generic wish-fulfillment fanfic so don't expect anything crazy going in. At the beginning, the grammar is horrible but it does improve later on. Dialogue is ok, doesn't really improve later on but it doesn't need to. Overall writing was okay but after the Lumen's (MC) "death", it started devolving pretty quickly. Lumen (MC): The author establishes the main character as an assassin before he was sent to the world of Tower Of God, probably for him to have a cold demeanor and not be phased by killing others in the Tower which is fine but Lumen, at the start anyway, acted like he was a mix of two characters. One the cold/dark killer MC the author wanted and two a friendly and cocky high schooler. I didn't really mind it, but after his "death" Lumen went full on edgy arrogant chunni mode which made the fanfic turn into a mess really. Story Development: A lot of the shit doesn't make sense. The fanfic is really inconsistent with how the world of Tower of God actually works, mainly the rules of the tower. The floor guardians are the ones who enforce the rules so when one of the rules is "rankers can't directly interfere with regulars in the tower" you can't have the MC just start fighting Rankers left and right. There are some plot holes too, like Lumen telling Yuri he didn't have her contact info when it was said they exchanged contact info, Lumen at the start was very skeptical about Baam's "death" that he theorized Baam being threatened by FUG into working for them but then somehow forgets and says he might kill him even after he talked to Jinsung and should have confirmed his theory, etc. World Background: With the amount of timeskips in ToG and how many floors get glossed over, that leaves fanfic authors with a lot of creative freedom. The highlight of the fanfic is probably how well the author can easily create and bring floors that haven't been explored in the official work to life. Characters: I really liked how most of the characters are portrayed by the author. Even his own original characters like Tiana and Diana are well written, almost every single character are in line with how they are in the manhwa. However, there are some characters that are OOC like Anak, in my opinion I think there's no way in hell Anak would think of Lumen like a brother, she might respect (hell even admire) him but Anak would no way treat someone like that just from being beaten by them and then getting trained by them. Also Urek is so OOC he might as well be an OC because holy **** did the author mess his character up. FUG is fucking joke in this fanfic, they may as well be called Team Rocket. Urek supposedly killed 2 slayers and one elder but since there are 4 vacant seats of the 11 slayers, who did Urek kill? It can't be Karaka or Yama because they get talked about afterwards (Yama) or show up (Karaka). The other 5 are sleeping and/or have unknown whereabouts (according to Baam) even if it was two of the other 5 they are probably either from the 2nd gen demons or are one of the ancient gods meaning Urek can't just "rip them to pieces" especially with an elder being with them. Overall: It's an ok read. I'm dropping it but that doesn't mean that potential readers should, give it a chance maybe you'll like it more than I did. Writing fanfics on series like ToG and One Piece is difficult because how amazing the official work is, I feel like the author has a good idea here but executed it poorly. If the Author decides to rewrite this fanfic, I will definitely give it a read though. Rating: 3-4/10