No re-write or fixing of grammar needed. Bro only thing I hope u won't quit this work because it's too good. And one chapter on regular basis is enough
Bro great chapter and I hope u won't let mc get beaten by rose because of his guilty conscience or something like that. And he is acting a little cringe.
Great work brother and I hope u will complete this work and just don't drop this work. Now it's one of my favourite fanfiction...............................