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ImSarius

ImSarius

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Writer of three ongoing stories; Unwieldy, Fixture in Fate, and Ribbon! My Discord: http://bit.ly/PocketDimension

2019-01-24 JoinedAustralia
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  • ImSarius
    ImSarius2yr
    Replied to crimsonitaci

    Thankyou! Hope you enjoyed reading so far :D

    Ch 55 Layers
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    ImSarius2yr
    Replied to Mike_Smith

    If you want to see it that way, sure. You can reduce it down to Grayson being power mad, or you could also look at it another way. He's been repressed in one way or another for his entire life, and now he's finally finding a way to exert himself upon the world instead of the other way around. In a way that is about as outlandish in comparison to his past life as it could be, no less. However you want to see it. :)

    Ch 32 Reasons
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    ImSarius2yr
    Replied to Yans_Tad

    Hey man, all good. Not every story is for everyone, and that's just fine. I'm aware of how jarring the initial relationship for Suzumi and Grayson is, and it's something that I'll likely fix in an edited version of the story at some point. I've been told by many that they believe that Urahara is acting out of character, either to angry, cruel, or anything in between, and I have to agree. Mostly because it isn't my intention for him to be the same character as he was back in the show. Also, Yoruichi isn't present. Sending her to scout is only one way that Urahara is capable of collecting information, and the way he did it here was due to a deduction similar to 'keep your friends close, but your enemies closer'. There are reasons for Urahara being the way he is, and they have seemed to satisfy people so far. As for Grayson being a wimp? I don't think so, and I can't see why you'd think so either. Because he cried? Because he shows emotions beyond a stoic, psychopathic guise or just pure anger and teenage angst? Yes, Grayson cries, because suddenly having your entire world ripped from underneath you is scary, and being forced to question yourself and who and what you are is difficult. I can't, in good conscience, be told that Grayson is a wimp, when only yesterday I was told that he was 'too OP'. Maybe it's simply all a matter of perspective. Either way, I hope you return to Ribbon at some point, and if you don't that's fine. There's always another story out there, waiting for you to read it!

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    ImSarius2yr
    Replied to Critical_Fumble_6746

    Up to you to decide that! But, there is reason behind the madness, of course! Whether you agree on how Urahara would act now, or in future when you understand where I'm writing him from, is up to you. However, I think there is good enough reason for him to be this way, especially with 'unknowns' :3

    Ch 4 Terse Conversations
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  • ImSarius
    ImSarius2yr
    Replied to TogeruShd151

    Thanks for the compliment man, it means a lot :)

    Ch 41 Tower
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    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to Skele_Bro

    We must go back!

    As soon as we began the fight, I realised—once again—how difficult it was to adjust to actually having sight. Sight was great but worked to your great detriment when each attack threw up a flurry of dirt and stone—making my little monkey brain focus on the falling detritus. As soon as I'd gotten my limited sight back, my brain had decided to take everything I saw as gospel, even if what I was looking at was nonsense to my other senses.
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    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to John_Whiskey

    Grayson is still capable of seeing outlines! He can see the display stands that are in the room without issue, but anything beyond the shape is lost on him.

    Before long we had arrived at what I presumed to be Urahara's Sweets. As I got out of the car, I looked to see a strangely shaped building, much in what I imagine was a more traditional Japanese style, rather than the modern stone block buildings that surrounded it—a sharp contrast with the regular surrounding buildings. I was led towards a set of doors that slid open sideways, and into a storefront filled with two rows of product.
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  • ImSarius
    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to Amir_Blumenfeld

    Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad that you like the story so much, and hope you continue to enjoy in future! I have some other stories as well, if you ever want to read more from me :)

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    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to ghostdiam

    Glad to hear that you're enjoying!

    Ch 21 Perfect
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    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to God_of_Destruction

    War plays heavily on the mind. However, he may soon return to be who he once was, in due time. :))

    "Unaware? Unaware of holding a soul this powerful? Even Kurosaki manifested his powers in ways, and he had nowhere near as powerful a soul as just a kid!" Urahara's voice reverberated through my very bones, making my body shudder with the effort to simply resist falling apart to it.
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  • ImSarius
    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to sindbad

    I post a few stories and don't intend to stop any time soon! I'm really glad that you enjoy FixFate so far! If you're interested, join in on my Discord, or read my other stories that you can find in my author profile. I hope you have a great day!

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    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to ZerSpectre

    I'm glad to hear you've been enjoying man. I'd love to see you in my discord if you feel like it :) https://bit.ly/PocketDimension

    Ch 24 Malleable Perception
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    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to ZerSpectre

    Such is the way of serialised content! I can only write so much a day at a consistent pace, so unfortunately, the cliffhangers are just a part of how the medium works. You can rest assured that I never try to create a cliff hanger situation, only that I need to stop writing, and thus there is a cliff hanger :)

    Ch 23 Dark Waters
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    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to Colossus_Eye

    Aww, thankyou! I'm glad to hear you like it. If you want to interact more at all, come and join my discord if you'd like! https://discord.gg/VnYYCg5Vw2

    Ch 10 For Tomorrow
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    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to ZerSpectre

    Ooh, that's definitely a theory! :)

    Ch 20 An Apparition
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    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to Chillnur

    Hahah, Kisuke can be a little... frustrating, yes :))

    Ch 6 Ribbon Snatcher
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    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to Harem_fan

    There is romance yes, but do keep in mind that the main character is blind for story reasons, and I am decidedly not. Whether the story will have an accurate depiction of blindness is something I tried to get at least a little right, but due to the story being what it is, he finds spiritual reasons for his blindness and so forth. I hope you enjoy reading if you do decide to read!

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  • ImSarius
    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to suggestaname

    Thank you for your review! If you liked this story, you might like my other originals as well! Fixture in Fate and Unwieldy! Look them up in Webnovel's search bar or in my author page and you have some more stuff from me to read! :))

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    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to Pimple_Face_13

    Tessai wasn't really shown much in the manga and show, but he used to be the Captain of the Kido Corps, one of the three arms of Soul Society's military (The Thirteen Guard Captains, Onmitsudo (Soifon's assassin group), and the Kido Corps). Tessai will likely be much stronger in this fic due to the fact that he was the captain of the Kido Corps, one of, if not the best Kido user in Soul Society. So yeah :)

    Ch 6 Ribbon Snatcher
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  • ImSarius
    ImSarius3yr
    Replied to Pimple_Face_13

    I believe that it was in the next chapter? Could be wrong. At some point soon he looks into the river and describes himself :)

    Ch 2 Hammer in the Dirt
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