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Brontoseno7hCommentedit will be interesting if the MC is an ugly person
""Heh, but we don't know what the future holds for me," Ren smiled gently. This beautiful smile was enough to make many teenage girls fall down and even make married women forget about their husbands. In addition to his handsome face, this smile gave him a unique masculine charm.- Brontoseno3mthPosted
good story. I hope you can continue this story and not stop suddenly. just a suggestion, I hope this story's pace doesn't move too fast, and you don't get too many pokemon at the start of the adventure. too many pokemon and too many high level pokemons at the start will result in the story being bland and boring. provide more strugle and challenges so that this story becomes unpredictable and exicting
- Brontoseno8mthCommented
why it feels like i read chinese novel character?
"The Phantom Thief Kid wants to crush on the dignity of the GCPD. But I, Jim Gordon, am the first to refuse! I believe neither will you." - Brontoseno8mthCommented
please dontnot the harem lord
'The original Forrest is affecting my emotional state which isn't too bad. It's not like I'm gonna become an edgy harem lord.' I joke to myself with a chuckle. Silently entertaining Billy for a bit till he sleeps, I see that the sun was starting to rise and exited the room. - Brontoseno1yrCommentedFortunately, while Inko's perky ass possessed an almost irresistible allure, Izuku managed to stay focused on his task without 'exacerbating' matters even further. There were several instances where his bulge made contact with Inko's intergluteal cleft, but he never once got erect. He really, really wanted to, but even if Izuku viewed Inko as a woman, it didn't change the fact she was his current body's mother. He was willing to do just about anything to make her happy, but there were some lines that shouldn't be crossed...
- Brontoseno1yrCommented
ah here they are how long it is? and i think you abandon us
Uh... Hi? - Brontoseno1yrCommented
pure soul mean the soul of future pervert and harem king
This book has been deleted. - Brontoseno1yrReplied to ChronoFaust
true but the story don't need to follow exactly like the gamer. with a little modification the story can become greater
[Reward: Skill 'Water Style - Hydro Blast Jutsu'.] - Brontoseno1yrCommented
ohh the mighty immortal master, bestow upon us your knowledge of drug you use!
(I wrote this in the middle having brain surgery on my foot 92 years ago. We are not the same, peasants!) - Brontoseno1yrCommented
just edit it with red eyes and white hair.
"But I'm different." - Brontoseno1yrPosted
i can say it is a good story BUT I felt the story itself was too forced. when the mc gets a Regional Pokémon with a high Rating, or for example when meeting meowth or meeting lance. the system itself was pretty good, but it could be better if the rewards from the quests were reduced. so that mc does not become strong instantly, but gradually.
- Brontoseno1yrPosted
this is what you called as surviving in the pokemon world. not just some guy get transmigrated and get a f...ing aura something and become the dark lord. the story pace is good. but i think you can slow down a litle for the pokemon growth, so the story can get more develope maybe? i just have some problem with how MC pokemon easly destroy a "gang" of another pokemon with an or some eveolved form of their "gang". maybe you can give more "battle" and "hardship" so we the reader can see the pokemon growth, the hardship, the hurt, the wining from being a pokemon trainer KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
- Brontoseno1yrCommentedAnd knowing I had a few hours to treck before I got to my new home, I turned my back on the flame pulling my little pull cart full of goods and started to make my escape from the scene of the crime…
- Brontoseno1yrCommentedCh 26 Awkward Adventure (2/3)
- Brontoseno1yrReplied to glo_antttt
and you are ugly
• Physical Constitution : Spirit Body (Unity), Life Affinity Physique, Wood Affinity Physique - Brontoseno1yrCommentedCh 33 Romance poll
- Brontoseno1yrCommented
dont forget to eat your food and sun tanning. get well soon my friend
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