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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper2mth
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    +1

    Worm: The Lizard Daddy that Replaced Armsmaster
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    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
    Book&Literature · JManM
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper3mth
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    "Ho, Konoha!" I greeted the on guard Team 7 as I tossed my shrimp fried rice in my big wok, releasing big wok energy into the universe.
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    Son of Jiraiya and Zabuza's Waifu Adventure
    Anime & Comics · JManM
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper5mth
    Commented

    I thought you were going to revisit your Kiba Naruto story?

    After this one, I'd like to do some sequel work on my Cyberpunk story where we go back in time and see Juan's story if the devil hadn't changed his original power, speed reading, to the Fallout System. I am approaching the limit author's have on this site for stories, so I'll post it as a new volume of 'In Cyberpunk with the Fallout System' and change the name of the story to 'In Cyberpunk without the Fallout System'. 
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    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
    Book&Literature · JManM
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper5mth
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    Ch 46 Tourney at Harrenhal Part 8
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    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
    Book&Literature · JManM
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper9mth
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    Turin Turambar

    Ch 1 Signing Up
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    Waifu Catalog: Crushing Missions For A Beautiful Future
    Anime & Comics · JManM
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper9mth
    Commented

    Turin Turambar

    Ch 1 Signing Up
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    Waifu Catalog: Crushing Missions For A Beautiful Future
    Anime & Comics · JManM
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper10mth
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    What does Crystallization Upgrade do?

    Ch 22 Chapter 22
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    Harem in a Labyrinth
    Anime & Comics · Avi2112
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper10mth
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    What plan does the MC have that his fourth son went forth and ruined?

    Ch 41 Tourney at Harrenhal Part 3
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    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
    Book&Literature · JManM
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper10mth
    Replied to Roasted_Brenden

    Could you tell me the name of the story?

    Alternate Title: Evil is Personal!; I Quit!; The Store Owner Returns!; Sweet, sweet, Roberta!; The Stoic Menace... Smiles!; Next Goal: Ten Amazonesses!; Aspiration of Tapping!
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    Is it Wrong to Employ Cute Girls in a Store?
    Anime & Comics · FanHarem
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper1yr
    Commented
    Here's the corrected text while keeping the format unchanged:
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    Singularity in Primal Chaos
    Anime & Comics · meatball_san
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper1yr
    Commented

    4,500 people originally? On the whole island? That's so low.

    Though we never bothered creating strictly accurate census data, we knew from yearly taxes that Bear Island hosted around forty five hundred people before the boys and I dropped another three hundred and sixty thralls on our shores.
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    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
    Book&Literature · JManM
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper1yr
    Commented

    I can't the story you said you prewrite called harry potter and the hand of stone, where can I find this story?

    Ch 94 Storm Breaker
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    Mass Effect SI: Ultimate Krogan
    Video Games · JManM
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper1yr
    Commented

    Some chapters focusing on maritime activity would be nice.

    More of a geography chapter than a maritime one. Unfortunately I do not know much about sailing as I am a giant desert rat. I'll try to look into the topic if sailing gives the audience stiffies, so speak now if you really want this story to focus on the maritime activity, otherwise just getting the geography correct will be it for the most part.
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    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
    Book&Literature · JManM
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper1yr
    Commented

    Who's Kiba? Is he from your "Naruto SI: The Son of Jiraiya" story?

    I find myself in the unfortunate situation of knowing exactly how this story is supposed to continue and not being able to muster any spirit to write it. I just can't seem to give a fuck about Juan and his adventures the same way I can't seem to give a fuck about Kiba's. I have both these stories planned out to their conclusion, but I've got no excitement for them.
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    In Cyberpunk With Fallout System
    Video Games · JManM
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper1yr
    Commented

    Warhammer dwarf in Westeros

    Ch 56 Quick Question
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    In Cyberpunk With Fallout System
    Video Games · JManM
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper1yr
    Commented

    What does it mean when you say 'yep' or 'nope' and pop the p?

    "Yep," I popped the P then did a full 180 degree turn as Chupa fell from the ceiling. Bending down I peered into his eyes, "So where is my thank you for taking care of the ambush and getting our next clue on this little adventure?"
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    The Fastest Man Alive - Marvel
    Anime & Comics · BigToFu
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper1yr
    Commented

    +1

    We have strayed too far from the Grace of God. Turn back before it is too late(No).
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    BNHA: Singularity
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper1yr
    Replied to Joaquin_Bonilla_2031

    No need for an apology. I was throwing out some ideas to you, that's all.

    Ch 3 Great Massacre (1/2)
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    Reincarnated With Mount & Blade Universal System
    Anime & Comics · Joaquin_Bonilla_2031
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper1yr
    Commented

    Hey author, during the dialogue between characters, If you make it obvious enough who started the conversation first, then I don't think there's any need for you to have the name of the characters at the beginning of each dialogue. Just a thought.

    Ch 3 Great Massacre (1/2)
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    Reincarnated With Mount & Blade Universal System
    Anime & Comics · Joaquin_Bonilla_2031
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  • GoatFlapper
    GoatFlapper1yr
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    I love this chapter. I read a lot of MHA fanfic but I believe most just allowed the attack to happen and let the villains escape; not before showing how good and better the MC is, of course. Or most just skipped this plot entirely. I believe if the MC hadn't declined the OFA; your MHA would likely have the same plot directions as the rest of MHA fanfics I've read, at least to this plot point.

    Ch 19 Chapter 18
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    BNHA: Singularity
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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