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shikamaru is obviously smarter
right because he can speed blitz him back to Kurt's subspace, or back to the first dungeon. doesn't make any sense
no real women does this bruh
this is how I know the author is a virgin, this is NOT how you finger someone.
the ki ball wouldn't have gotten any heavier the denser it got. if it was decreasing in size proportional to the increase in density, mass would stay the same. imagine pulling the air out of a styrofoam packing peanut. the density increases, but the weight stays the same
how did the moon appear before the planet
so the dumb man's antimatter
this isn't how pim particles work. they don't create "more" of an object. it supposedly just increases or decreases the distance between atoms. therefore if you took a chunk out of an enlarged peice of vibranium, there would be a comparably sized chunk taken out of the original size. the amount of matter stays the same
do you not remember when he cloaked the entire allied force?
only the hilt is physically manifested. the rest of the sword is there seemingly incorporeally, but can still be tangible?
ants kill African elephants all the time. they crawl into their ear and kill them that way
how does she know English?
why not? that literally makes no sense. You are given a skill by a god that can't buy illegal drugs and guns, but you are transported to a world with slavery. makes no sense
politicians?
it doesn't matter. he literally never gets hurt, therefore it means no conflict. you don't know how to write a compelling story, and since you are too ignorant to take criticism, I know ad hominems will hurt you. go back to highschool english, kid.
I had to skin through the chapters. you're character literally never loses. never gets hurt. ever. there is no point for his power or his drive for power. there is no depth. and his powers are unoriginal!! you literally took them from another source retard, that is the definition of unoriginal.
hey author, this is becoming extremely boring and Im going to drop it. there is literally no conflict in this story. tendo does whatever he wants, for absolutely no reason. his powers are boring and unoriginal, yet apparently he can beat whoever he wants? where are the good fight scenes? there is no point of him getting new powers because he randomly beats everyone. you have absolutely no clue how to create conflict in a story. go back to school