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yeah I really dont look different from 17 and that was 10 years ago

honestly might drop if this is all the story is, filler lines that dont progress the plot or characters had a good thing going but its just hurting

I skipped this paragraph because author use of "comedic lines" as a way to describe stuff has just become cringe

Honestly fair crash out on Lea's part. Peter should feel guilty cause he fumbled a baddie even before the system trying to be an edge lord

totally its the fact that if they ride Elon they probably have a shit personality

honestly started off really strong, good descriptions and characters were interesting but the MC falls off by chapter 20, dumb MC making dumb choices I get it its a smut but if you start off with an interesting character write them well.

I obviously have to give myself 5 stars. I wanted to come in and mention that although my book starts slow, the quality improves as time goes on. The pacing and characters all get a massive upgrade aswell. Alexander is intelligent and uses that to his advantage more and more. The smut scenes are probably the best part of the book, so stick around for all that and more.

I hope you enjoy 😊

I hope you are enjoying reading. I've got a lot planned for this world and hope you can support with votes and collections. Thank you!

I'm introducing the magic system a little slowly. Magic works a little different in this world than conventionally but spells is where it will get really interesting. I hope you are enjoying reading and add to your collections. ☺️