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Sooo... how is it going?

Holly molly the Guy is dead?

Thanks for the warning because this story has all the things I don't like; you saved me time.

Well... is haz been 9 months just 3 months more and is Year... i Give up waiting thanks for all.

In short, you don't have to read anything because the system solves everything for you. We're already off to a bad start because of this kind of thing; it's why systems stopped working. When systems in stories first started, their purpose was simply to give you a numerical visual representation of what you were doing, remove the growth limit, and make it easier to learn skills, but they didn't solve everything for you like the systems of today. This just makes the story boring because you don't fight for anything. No real effort.

Well the TV feels more like a Ninja thing only if you have money or are a hero orpan son you get one over there seems like.

This is a comedy...

The story would be better without this first chapter, to be honest. In my experience, starting like this is not a good sign; there's a reason many authors prefer to skip the protagonist's death or make it short by jumping to a new body instead of describing post-life events, which only harms the story.

Yeah is already 5 months whit not a single word this is dead as hell is time to take it out of my list.