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While the grammar makes it hard to read, this book has a lot of potential .

Hi! I know English can be very hard for those that don't know it as their first language in this paragraph it should be "villagers also finished their dishes very quickly

in this context way should be spelt weigh

i hope you have good luck.

I can understand that. If you live in the U.S, you most places have food banks or food pantries. i know some states will give food stamps too. If you have kids, the food stamp office could help you find a place as well. i have been homeless.

why do I have a feeling one of the people who assassinated the emperor's son was his sister

I think this book has great potential and the story seems great but the grammar can really use some work as it makes the book hard to read.

I can see the potential in this book. However, the grammar can really use some work.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I knew it was going to be Bella the moment Nial noticed he recognized the mana signature but couldn't recognize it.