Micetto

This is a pretty enjoyable story and so far (ch 125) except for a few little things I have nothing to object. Yer there are a few cliche troupes here and there but they do not feel overused. There is little worldbuildins but that's becouse the information is given when the situation arise, so no immediate info dump. Keep the good work author

thanks for the chapter, but this mecha-girl could't send a message directly to Derek? why did she has to wait for him to randomly appear to an auction to meet him? I mean she has a phone that could access to outside informations. Finding his number or a contact should not be too difficult. Anyway except for some other little things, I like the story keep it up. p.s.: this chapter has a some formatting issue

This is all so stupid, they are facing an apocalypse and everyone is backstabbing everyone, even the MC is not so different from the others. oh well , nothing of value will be lost when they'll die or realize Earth is now unliveable

Like the story, even if Stella is sometime a bit annoying

Since when the Shipgirls were able to read/see the system? In the chapters before the Destroyer wasn't able to see it but now she can? And Astra during the first mission also wasn't able to see it . but now she can?

From what I read and from what I see it , I don't think Acqua is compatible with the MC, unless she'll change after several reality checks

There are a lot of secondary and tertiary female characters in DxD that one can use. Just becouse Rias and her perigee are the main ones, doesn't mean that in a crossover she always have to be present/play a central/important role around the main cast in a fanfic

I hope he ignores Rias, there are several more interesting character that no one uses.

Chaos gremlin acquired , say goodbye to peace, common sense and vaults. Waiting for Fluffy Mama to come back

the original one is : https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13495344/1/Unique