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FadingPenguin

FadingPenguin

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2019-01-21 JoinedGlobal
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  • FadingPenguin
    FadingPenguin7mth
    Commented

    💀💀💀 what is this bro

    Ch 1 1. Bones of the Filibuster Chapter I: Simoun JoJo, ...
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    JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Blood of the Grimms
    Others · MasaruAbatman
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    FadingPenguin1yr
    Commented

    this has potential to be equivalent to lord of mysteries its well researched and written in a way that evocates emotion

    Ch 369 Eon Soul Dew, Death, and Lethifold
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    Multiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial Tower
    Book&Literature · droopyauthor
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    FadingPenguin2yr
    Commented

    this feels like revamped aot with yin being a less mature young eren

    Ch 41 Way Back Home
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    Thanatos System
    Fantasy · aoiYuki
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    FadingPenguin3yr
    Posted

    abt 1/3 of the reviews are all spam, so it feels like the high rating it has is kinda cap.::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: I

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    My Hero Academia: The customizer
    Anime & Comics · overloaded_maxima
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    FadingPenguin3yr
    Commented

    door the open

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
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    Percy Jackson: The God of Magic
    Book&Literature · CORNBRINGER
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    FadingPenguin3yr
    Commented

    Since you’ve said you have little ideas on how to continue the book, ive thought of a few u can use as ideas to write. Theres two ways i can see the story finishing. 1 would be if you somehow had his system malfunction and find a way to write a character stranded at whatever world, having to use only their current abilities to survive. The 2nd and in my opinion better option would be to have all of his previous worlds revolts succeed, and in the end he will have to fight every hero he has been nurturing”. While im not sure if you are already hinting at this with the rebellion in bleach, it seems like the only way to continue the story without it getting boring for the readers, and you writing it. Love it so far, hope you finish updating chapters soon and gl

    Ch 128 The Need Of A Snake
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    The Universal Villain[Old]
    Anime & Comics · Aizen_Dleitch
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    FadingPenguin3yr
    Posted

    Honestly one of the best written things on the site ive seen. The plot development, quality of writing, and obvious experience with human interaction (which sadly most who write on here dont have) all make it amazing. Personally, i prefer to read things that are either neutral in their views, with some LGBTQ+ relationships and some not, or just no relationships at all, as when i and many other readers come onto the site they are mainly looking for a good read that is usually action packed, or has an amazing plot like this one. The only reason i will not continue reading this is because of the way i choose to read. I try to stay away from social/societal issues when reading because they are what are making me want to read in the first place. As of chapter 30, which is what ive read up to, there has been mostly no issues being brought up, but as the story started getting more fleshed out the more i realized one of the main topics that would be discussed and very prevalent would be the opinions people have on the lgbt community. An example of a story that is similar to this in terms of how fleshed out the story is, and explanations would be Zombie Knight. If you have time i would really you read a bit of it as it would greatly improve the already amazing story you have created. Overall a 5, but will not be reading as it will probably just take a toll on my mind i dont currently need or want.

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    World's First Demon Lord
    Fantasy · sinfuego
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