ZeeRan

peak Fiction enjoyer vs Gooner fanfiction enjoyer

There is a lot of potential that could come from bringing in the MC's struggles. For example, it can elevate the romance and emotional scenes, bring more satisfaction and reward when beating opponents. I know there is an OP tag, but at least you can bring some gimmick or trump card that comes from his enemies.

This is a decent R18 novel. You've handled the smut chapters well. This novel has great potential in world building and plot. The thing is, it lacks epicness and 'heart-burning' scenes that usually come from the MC's struggles, so I hope you prepare more challenges in the upper realm arc. Next is just a personal preference: I think the heroines lack personal diversity. If you want to make a larger harem, you should add more diverse personalities so it will bring memorable characters and each interaction will pop up more lively.

bruh, this sentence is like a broken radio that repeats continuously.