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Wintersatyr

Wintersatyr

Lv15

Is questioning our existence our purpose in life?

2019-01-20 JoinedAustralia
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  • Wintersatyr
    Wintersatyr1yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 I'm a Professional Player?
    altalt
    Global Game: AFK In The Zombie Apocalypse Game
    Games ¡ Empire Black Knight
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  • Wintersatyr
    Wintersatyr2yr
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    If I were in your shoes I would choose to make it an original. But since you already had a planned story, I would highly recommend thinking about the plot, characters and world building. Really revise if you do need to alter the plan and don't rush. Because in my personal opinion quality of the story comes foremost, not the received payment from the readers. Because if it is good quality readers will find it and religiously follow it. So far you are doing great in terms of quality. It is hard to make a reader really admire/love/hate a character, for me so far there is not enough to attach feelings or emotions to the characters to make them feel "alive". They are likeable and I can see the potential for them to feel like they are "alive" but that is going to depend on how the storyline and you, author shape them. Bare in mind this is just my opinion/review/suggestions about the novel so far. Good luck with your exams/work. Bless you with a clear mind when making your choice. We readers will be waiting and accepting of whatever you choose.

    Ch 24 Your choice + Infos
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    Darling zero dawn
    Sci-fi ¡ Crak
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  • Wintersatyr
    Wintersatyr2yr
    Commented

    Damn this is extortion... take my stones ;)

    Maybe a few magic stones may change an all powerful writer's mind.
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    Darling zero dawn
    Sci-fi ¡ Crak
    detail
  • Wintersatyr
    Wintersatyr2yr
    Commented

    Despite being a fast ending it is a better ending than most other webnovels.

    Ch 859 Elope to Arcana Land (The End)
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    The Genius System Without Equal
    Urban ¡ Straw is crazy too
    detail
  • Wintersatyr
    Wintersatyr2yr
    Commented

    I'm liking this keep up the good work author.👍

    Ch 24 Hunt.
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    Ace Of Terrans
    Sci-fi ¡ THE_WORDSMITH
    detail
  • Wintersatyr
    Wintersatyr2yr
    Commented

    What is Lugh's age again?

    Ch 127 The Junior You Like
    altalt
    Shock! The Spell Is In English!
    Fantasy ¡ Soy Sauce-San
    detail
  • Wintersatyr
    Wintersatyr2yr
    Commented

    Isn't that a Dropbear?

    This was a Titan Direbear, evolved from a koala. 
    altalt
    My Special Ability is Perfect Replication
    Fantasy ¡ Tuanyuan, The Little Panda
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  • Wintersatyr
    Wintersatyr2yr
    Commented

    Plays Immigrant Song in head for 10 seconds.

    Ch 596 596 - Tales of Myth
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    Out of Space
    Sci-fi ¡ Neobear
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