Ntharani
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Ntharani9mthPostedthe book keeps me on edges. it has equal proportion of a cold woman who knew nothing but revenge and a emotional mother who could put her life at stake for the protection of her child. her struggles feel real against most of the novels where a person change completely after rebirth. I feel connected to Ana. well done author
- Ntharani10mthCommentedCh 1 The Start Of My End
- Ntharani2yrCommented
yeah, go easy girl.
"Whoa easy there!" with such an awkward position, left arm crossed to her waist's right, her right hand raised clutching the flowers, body a bit twisted and their knees knocked on each other, she looked up to see a man's deep emerald eyes staring back at her, the corner of his lips curved as if scoffing at her clumsiness. What a smug face. "The name's Archer and I own this flower stall. Would you care to buy some flowers, miss?" he said. - Ntharani2yrCommented
did she say that loud! another embarrassment
"Oh shit!" she exclaimed as his breath brushed through the tiny hairs of her left ear sending electric shocks from the back of her skull down to her spine. Adrenaline shot to her toes making her jerk in surprise, which made her silly foot trip. Moments from kissing the pavement, strong arms caught her just in the nick of time. - Ntharani2yrCommented
wow, sexy flower man
"You chose a very special flower miss." a melodic cool-toned man's voice said behind her ear. - Ntharani2yrCommented
which flower is it?
Curious, she got closer and started inspecting the little display that was available. She picked up some dainty white flowers and observed it had grass-like foliage and erect flower stalks which supported what looked like stars. They had a distinct sweet fragrance she quite can't put her finger into - like a distant memory that she was fond of but can't remember. - Ntharani2yrCommented
with cookies, I would think so too.
Red's grandmama lived just across the corner street next to their office building, about two blocks ahead and would normally take ten minutes to walk. Whenever Red wanted a quick escape, she would instantly think of sweet grandmama and her chewy aromatic cookies. - Ntharani2yrCommented
why in hurry?
The company bell rang and without hesitation she grabbed her things and half walked, half leaped her way towards the crystal elevator. - Ntharani2yrCommented
the time is slwoewt when we want it fast
"Yeah, sure why not? If grandmama baked lots I'll bring some over." Red said as she shifted from side to side in her small chair, anxiously awaiting that little one-hour break. She looked into her golden pocket watch. 11:59AM. One minute left till noon break. The clock's ticking drags on, every click of the second hand was another second closer to her longed escape. Tik-tok-tik-tok-tik-tok-tik-tok-tik-tok-tik… - Ntharani2yrCommented
she did sound sexy there
"Girl, you make me jealous! Bring us some of those delicious cookies your grandmama makes would 'ya?" chimed in Noelle as she sashayed her way back to her cubicle. She had been in their team the longest and a big sister to everyone. A team-leader, outgoing and beautiful, everybody loves Noelle Winters. From her midnight blue pixie cut hair to her cherry-red lips and round doll-like coffee eyes, every move she makes just makes her more irresistible. - Ntharani2yrCommented
nice start
A big explosion rocked what was thought to be a peaceful night. Where once stood a beautiful crystal-like building has now turned into millions of broken shards, sparkling in the darkness like sharp and deadly snowflakes. The full moon illuminated a young lady's serene face amidst the chaos. And stood beside her, a man who never took his eyes off of his queen. - Ntharani3yrCommented
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is , didn't
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was younger
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