Wishkun

hahahaha, I'm enjoying it man. i just commented on your review thread before I saw this comment. but overall I'm happy. I like how this is developing. I do know you want to introduce things slowly especially when it comes to the history of mages and everything and schools. so I'm just gonna sit and enjoy. hahaha.

I mean if you can stick to the current Era but at present as how the continent stands, there is only the Empire and North which is brought to light. The world building would solely upto you how you want to express it. is there only 1 continent? what if there are more? what if there is an empire which is more ancient than the current scope. what if there is Mix or Mage and knight empire. what if folklore of Dragons and elves may be, the mermaid too which I've read in the chapters are existing but just left for different places? it all depends how you spin it. though I'm an amateur when it comes to this, I'm just expressing my thoughts on how you want your world to be. you want William to stop after he becomes an emperor? or you want that to develop more too. even the current scope is enough for this book to be detailed and enjoyed so do not take offense. I loved reading till the latest chap. so hoping you enjoy creating it and letting us enjoy it as well.

ttfc

I'm just trying to understand the gaps, if a person is a Knight, how does he advance? mana pathways yes but what's the progression looks like?

Do we have any power level system, like saints and above saints?

There is no one Better than Jack!

hahahahaha, take my money.

Ugh, My pocket, coffee. keep it friendly.

Jack Sparrow