SailorBelle210
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SailorBelle2103yrCommentedCh 159 Chapter One Hundred And Fifty-nine: Awoke The Demoness- SailorBelle2103yrCommented
you own me one the correct phrase should be “you owe me one”
"Because you own me one for last night " he concluded shamelessly. - SailorBelle2103yrCommented
release me - let me go
Mishi nodded and said, "I've to go now so release me". Xian released her and Mishi walked out of the room. Xian took his clothes and went inside the washroom. - SailorBelle2103yrCommented
picks - pics
"Okay then let's start....", said Xian and put his DSLR around his neck. "You trio stand there and I'll click picks for you", said Xian. "Mishi you're shortest among us so you'll stand in middle", said Mark and stood at her left while Yin at right. Xian clicked their photos and they continued walking. - SailorBelle2103yrCommented
I was sleeping
She smiled and said, "ahh sorry Xian....I was in sleep....." - SailorBelle2103yrCommented
Well, we will take a walk
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“Where are we going?”
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“I’ll take photos for you”
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Whete? - what is that?
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I have finished eating
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“Put your hair down” So many grammatical error throughout the story and quite challenging to understand 😅 Please get someone to edit because the storyline is very good. Good luck and keep writing & improving yea 🥰
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“He smiled wickedly and then me if down the bed” - I don’t understand this phrase. or maybe there’s some error here. Sorry if you find my comments annoying 😅 Just trying to help out
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My suggestion : “Give water to plants” - watering the plants 😊
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- SailorBelle2103yrCommentedCh 800 To Your House