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GenTap10mthCommentedeyyyyy, Vesy boi finally a senior! can't wait to see Gloriana's reaction!
The Larkinson Clan had taken another step towards dominance now that its patriarch became a Senior Mech Designer.- GenTap11mthCommented
curiosity killed the cat, and apparently, ves can be a good cat representation that his bones would fit right next to them.
Logically speaking, it didn't make sense for him to waste his time and effort into doing so, but he was too damn curious to leave this mystery unsolved. - GenTap11mthCommented
inb4 ves' bones gets added to the pile lul
He wanted to learn what this pile of bones truly represented! - GenTap11mthCommented
lemme wait until the larkinsons leave davute.
Saint Yorvick actually experienced much greater turmoil than he should have! All of the plans he had considered alongside a small group of informed individuals never mentioned anything about making so many crucial figures disappear at once! - GenTap11mthCommented
Larkinsons disappearing from Davute? yes please.
Disappeared - GenTap11mthCommented
Watch them leave davute after this mess, lol.
"Believe in your citizens, Yenames." Yorvick calmly replied. "You did not ask for this test, but you can make use of it to see which mech companies and mech forces are worth courting. Be glad that Karlach is testing us before the proper war has commenced. It is much more costly for our colonial state to make misjudgments when we have already invested heavily in the wrong groups. Look at how the parade mechs of the Larkinson Clan are faring. Both their standard mechs and expert mechs are performing more than admirably. Their Everchanger is worth as much as four expert mechs during a violent attack such as this due to its glow abilities alone!" - GenTap1yrCommented
Hopefully his expedition starts before the guy from friday coalition who's name i totally did not forget comes to talk with him lol.
Ves became so driven by this new initiative that he quickly activated his desk terminal and began to structure his thoughts and intentions into an initial document. - GenTap1yrCommented
Same with the readers, too bad cliffhanger is such a water sprinkler.
A fire lit up inside Ves. - GenTap1yrCommented
A female red head, if she grows up to become a pilot... I imagined she somehow resembles those red haired, feisty, warrior anime girls i watched when i was a kid.
Gloriana held a baby in her arms. Her second daughter was already a few months old at this time and already bore a small tuft of red hair on her delicate head. - GenTap1yrCommented
i wonder where ves gets all of these ideas? his maxed out creativity or something? what was it? 3.0? 4.0? in creativity
Ves could even drop Andraste to the ground and attempt to bounce her body like an organic basketball without causing too much harm to his baby's body! That was how absurd her physical state had grown! - GenTap1yrPosted
Because why not? This is my first book, refined by me. The story writing is amateurish at best, the story pace is all over the place. It's filled with grammatical errors, and wrong spellings everywhere. Story originality is somewhere but not here, characters are somewhat bland. But the author definitely placed some effort in this book so its 5 starts for me.
- GenTap1yrCommented
Ves really loves his mommies, he can't get enough of them.
Nurturing Mother - GenTap1yrCommented
A bit too late to ask that question.
"Have I gone crazy?" - GenTap1yrCommented
still bringing that heart ache out ves?
The Annals of Terra Vita most definitely had a relationship with the Earth Scroll. If not, then Ves was a mech pilot! - GenTap1yrCommented
To become the villain, i mean compared to Ves you're a smol villain.
Minister Shederin gazed steadily at Ves. "You have no problem in encouraging the Aducs to do the same. What if I tell you that as long as you sabotage the Old Lady, I can close a deal with the Aduc Family within 24 hours? You do not even need to step forward yourself. I can be the 'villain' who will exert all of the pressure and attract their animosity. You can come in after we have made an agreement and personally bring their Old Lady back from the brink of destruction." - GenTap1yrCommented
hah!
"Ves! Why didn't you introduce me to your sister?!" - GenTap1yrCommented
pffft
In a distant location, an alien stealth vessel had just encountered tragedy! - GenTap1yrCommented
what in the frick did i just tell you?! Keep. Your. Seed. Away.
"You. I need you. Can I take a piece of your body so that I can make your present? I promise it will only hurt at the beginning." - GenTap1yrCommented
u better keep your seed of life away from her in the future.
Ves gained a new relative.