so she just got cheated on n she is now happy? twisted

is Gavin gay? He gives different vibes at times

this is perfection on a whole new level. good work

he is so shameless toward a clueless girl

I believe its alright to have mysteries to keep readers on the edge. but if u make it more like a puzzle it becomes interesting, esp knowing that with more chapters each puzzle is unearthed. if there are too many mounting mysteries without just one recovery then it becomes more like a dessert. however thank you.

this story has so many ommissions and mystries that it gets too boring to read. the content itself is great buh the FL is too much of a coward who is depicted to be strong it makes one really loose interest. I think those little things need attention and your book will soar

nice

I believe u need a lil work on this paragraph,esp the use of past and present tense.

Very interesting... More please.

🤣🤣🤣🤣 I'm hooked, I must say

Still waiting for "pregnant wife runs away"... The pain she is enduring and bearing...enough is enough. Let her disappear

I think u still need to work on the R18 scene... make it more enticing, make the reader feel needy

Chapters are getting too short and ugly....

So u freed her to let her fall into an abuyss?

So the Li Shen guy took the two (Xinxin and Dr Gu) to a hotel or what?

After how many chapters will she be able to escape? I'm tired of having to feel sorry for her

What angers me the most is a powerless woman. Why do authors like to write about women who have no other options but to let men step all over them?

Finally. I'm relieved for her

Leave this idiot

I have a feeling that Tang Xin is actually the woman he has been looking for. I stand to be corrected. Fact that this Xixin lost memories before 8 is some how questionable. What if the Tang family exchanged them?