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this is thr same as the other story about the sister who got raped and blackmailed you want to make a story about revenge on a boss do not focus on punishing the sister yes she might be a bitch but be a little bit nicer and dont let the sister **** random guys and stuff like that again this is disgusting all other stories are great but stories like these i rather skip them then read you can do with the boss thing what ever you want but be nice and sweeter to the sister its just ****ed up sorry
okay but these 3 pages are straight up rape and illegal as hell i know that this is all just a story and ****** is already illegal but these 3 pages are a little over the top i couldn't read them cause thats something i hate is rape amd blackmailing i somehow hoped that the brother would stop his friend and snatch the camera out of the hands and kicked him put for going to far but apparently not i liked every other stories that i have read but the 4 with the raping no not gonna read them for the rest your doing a great job with these stories but nah raping and blackmailing into *** that is a little to far for the rest keep up the work
indeed haha