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TwinkieXO2hPostedI wont lie I am in love with this book and mc. How long have I waited for a strong op mc who is straight forward. He does what he wants, he dosent care abt morales and dosent try to be a hero. If he dosent like someone he kills them and if likes someone he fucks them. Simple as that. Op and badass. Some say the op is a villain but i disagree, i would say he is the definition of a pure minded being. Who does what his heat tells. He dosent kill because of malicious intent he kills because someone was a sick to him. So all in all if you want a badass crazy op mc. Who will happily do non-heroic actions. This is the book for you.
- TwinkieXO8hCommented
You tell me? Cause I thought it was clear survive until you get strong enough for revenge. Right now it should be survive to be strong enough to escape.
What had all those dayless nights in the rift been for? - TwinkieXO8hCommented
And stealing from the sage will help him how? Getting a air ship will help him how? Brother really dosent understand he needs to kill monsters to get stronger. At this point the only thing stealing from the sage will allow him to do is unlock a plot armor ability. Man this is tiering.
He wanted to be really strong. - TwinkieXO8hCommented
I agree mc is creaky below average iq and a hormonal simp. Just listening to monologues and need side characters to proceed the story. Why make a decision? Would be too revolutionary, can’t walk away from anime tropes.
...And stupid. - TwinkieXO8hCommented
Maybrpe he wouldn’t be complacent if he didn’t have to go on a trip with this hag. Use ur brain mc, dump her. Go to a rift and get killing.
And just as he had been reassessing himself since the incident, Raven's words once again brought to his face the fact that he had been too complacent. - TwinkieXO8hCommented
Simp
'...be..autiful... fuck it!' He cursed and gritted his teeth. - TwinkieXO8hCommented
Smile count-1
She smiled with her eyes and looked warmly into his. - TwinkieXO8hCommented
Simple answer: mind your own business.
"I think you are selling yourself too short. I don't know if you are doing it to hide... what is it you are hiding though? Your strength, your weakness? How are you ever going to grow if you hide everything? Or are you just a coward." - TwinkieXO8hCommented
What did you think your job was? To sit/stand there and look pretty?
"Uh, I see...wait, what?!" - TwinkieXO8hCommented
Thank god she wasn’t smiling.
Her face was glowing with beautiful sparkles of excitement; she wasn't smiling or particularly giving any emotion. - TwinkieXO8hCommented
Its ok just stick with one name. No need to do this name change mid sentence every time he speaks of night terror….dark terror. See wasn’t irritating to read.
What worried him, however, is if she knows a thing or two about his connection to Dark Terror... Night Terror. - TwinkieXO8hCommented
Show off
"I have an EX-class talent and an Abyssal rank attribute; as a Master, I'm stronger than fifty percent of the Masters out there, and I tell you, I don't think I'll be able to leave as much as a scratch on her." - TwinkieXO8hCommented
Smile count-1. Yes I am still doing this cause I just hate her and her smile.
A small smile left her face. - TwinkieXO1dCommented
Ask the system maybe Einstein
"I wonder how I'll enhance my Skills," Dante mused, deftly sidestepping and severing the arm of one of the ogres. Given his current stats, taking down these monsters was a walk in the park. - TwinkieXO1dCommented
Why? Just ask the question, knowledge is wealth. You can also gauge her strength that way.
So many questions, but instead of asking them, he silently studied Raven's seemingly lost stare. - TwinkieXO2dCommented
Smile count:1.
She concluded her statement with a pale, wistful smile. - TwinkieXO2dCommented
Smile count: 3
Raven looked at him, her expression back to stern and emotionless, then she gave a short smile. - TwinkieXO2dCommented
Smile count:2
"Exactly," she curled up a corner of her lips, "I was kidding you." Then she added, "It's fun to see you act like you care... I'm curious as to what demon lay dormant in you." - TwinkieXO2dCommented
Simple count cause I really hate it. Smile count for the chapter: 1
But his hand stopped in the air, held by a cold grip. Raven slowly lowered his hand and smiled. - TwinkieXO2dCommented
Remember this guy was married once.
'Crap, I can't believe I'm holding a girl's hand, and another one is on my back. What am I, a babysitter?'