An amazing read. The characters and the world builds are great.

not that great. it's too convoluted, the world was ok but the characters get very confusing to keep up with.

great read so far. looking forward to more challenging chapters .

dude buy a Microsoft 365 word license and throw your chapter in it. It will show you so many mistakes, it is insane!

I love this book and look forward to many more chapters. It Start off great until the MC gets his butt kicked and that is were the character building begins. Until that time it is just simply world building. Please do give it a shot.