If the heroine is up against a two dimensional soap opera villain, then we as readers are not respecting her. Great heroines struggle through adversity, making us respect her path. "You are your enemies".
Frustrating plot pacing. No reason to break chronological order of story points, it doesn't make the story more thrilling, on the contrary it makes it more sluggish.
It is like watching someone playing survivor computer game. It has its moments, but mostly dull. Wost translation though. A lot of missing blocks of text. A lot.
Is his transmuration ability totally unbalanced? To make a coin from technologically superior civilization he has to spend 200+ ponts, but to make super technologically challenging armor from a piece of clothing he only has to spend 4?? How is it logical?
wtf with all the forsed sentimentality? first with a random girl in a brothel, then with a madam of said brothel, now with a random abused kid on a street. is this a soap opera? when would an evil twin brother make his debut?