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Alemaari

Alemaari

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2019-01-15 JoinedGlobal
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  • Alemaari
    Alemaari2mth
    Posted

    A good example how webnovel ruins a good story by subpar translation. I remember reading this story with original character names but now everything is westernized and that too with inconsistent character names. I got headache by trying to keep up in first few chapters itself. Nothing against the author. It is a nice story.

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    The Big Shot’s Movie Star Wife Is Beautiful and Sassy
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  • Alemaari
    Alemaari3yr
    Posted

    the story is good but needs some editing. if grammar and spellings are refined it's really good as characters are strong and so is the storyline. I am no expert but I could help if the author is interest. because I really did like the characters.

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    Rebellious wife of President Wang
    Urban · Snat
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  • Alemaari
    Alemaari3yr
    Commented

    I think just 'mian' would suit the chocolate better and then he could explain why he named it that way.

    "Oh?" Zhang Liang curled up his lips. Beside him, Mr. Kira also seemed to be amused. "The name of the chocolate is Feng Mian."
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    1 Year of Beginning
    Urban · Sorahana
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