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its's Ben draging so much can you just compilation 5-8 chapter into one long chapter just use different POV in one looooooong chapter than make short PP size chapter multiplaying
don't know about all of you but for me its'stoo much technical inuendo and overlay complicated and a bit slow progress
great premise and caracterisation but you don't read Douluo Dalu !!!! everyone have martial spirit some mutated or defected most don't have inate spirit power soo 0 spirit power is majority 1 2 3 inate power is the most comon 4 5 6 is high enough to join secret 7 8 9 is high rank sect seed almost genius 10 is highest top rank spirit 20 only seraphin spirit hall
this is mi revision story start to change hope ITS getting better
the way story potrait and treat Sasuke from Brodin evenger to stupidly low iq soo like i said i know it mean to be funny but mehh
i know it mean to be a funny but the way ITS just feel like not again [img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=Relaxed]
man this is too short bassicaly what wrong Xiao wu tang hao come thats it
swap the chapter
to sort it can be sum up idrive my car fin a track stoping at the cave say hello
chapter length to shorts put 3 chapter into 1 your chapter is too literal rasa digging gold is rasa digging gold end chapter tittle is part of chapter not all of it