DonnyRuckles

undertale

undertale

Genuinely this is my favorite book on this website in a long while the enemies are set up well the world feels massive and the main character feels strong but not overpowered so there is still a challenge. There is some lack of development visually for a lot of things but that's only minor and the way its going right now its not totally needed but I do find myself curious as to what the goblins exactly look like are they similar to the goblins "or orcs" from Tolkien are they WoW goblins or are they unique with a different spin on them visually. This story is very good but I feel as if I cant really smell the village or see it often I am just assuming what it is and then we move on there is nothing that sits to marinate in my mind. Some things I loved where the little details of the titles for army structure from the goblin king like Schemer and Brute these perfectly match the aesthetic of the goblins and I loved that. Another thing is that the enemies laid out in all directions of the King make his challenge feel genuine and while I know most likely he wont lose based on prior book knowledge I can't help but worry about his safety. Lastly I love how the author has not made these gobbos these greenskinned gits into some bastardized form of humans like I see happening so many times they are not becoming a peaceful and kind race that just wants peace they are not a green human they are goblins with personalities and quirks and beauty and ugliness and violence but they are goblins and they still feel that way often the monsters in novels start off as monsters but then just become human which isn't always bad but is often dissapointing. Anyways love this book have added it to my library and as someone who is fickle and picky about almost everything I think almost everything sucks that says something. Much love man hope you enjoy every second of creating this.