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Surpassing the heavens, when all is against you. I like stories like this overcoming odds
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I love where this is going
i think another was just added to the harem. hehehehe. Bai is getting his wolf pack.
i would say keep it as it is. the only thing that gets me riled up is the lack of empathy Jake shows towards his friends hes trying to help. or any sort of anger towards the people he wants to defeat. idk if it has to do with his bloodline or not but it makes Jake seem less likeable with his nonchalant emotions. like yeah cool you realize all these things that Kyle didn't and kept a cool head to assess the situation but empathize with kyle a little bit and get agnry with him. It's like me as a reader my blood is boiling because of the situation but Jake is over there cool headed and indifferent and he's supposed to be the MC? Kyle is more likeable than Jake at this point in the book for me.
Why must you tease us? The stats won't hurt anybody. đ¤§
le bitch made. take it like a man.