Aspiring author too scared to write, so I just read. A lot.
Ugh I'm really tired of him being jealous of a cat
Mbbckhxjgs WHAT'S WITH THE BEEPING KGXJGZIYXOYC
For future note, y'all can use "they" instead of both binary pronouns.
It took me a while to piece my thoughts together. so I apologise for how late this reply is. Clinical depression could possibly be cured by switching brains, however that's a very basic way to look at depression. Depression will have lasting effects on a person even after they gain a control on it. this woman makes it clear she had depression hey while life and it wasn't well managed. Living a life with an MI that is unmanaged is traumatic. in and something that would stick with a person. On top of that suicidal ideation and clinical depression are not one in the same. suicidal ideation becomes habit. Especially if you have been suicidal most of your life. These are things that would stick with you even once you are living in a physically typical brain. Also it's a very dangerous thing to be telling people who possibly have suicidal ideation.
Came here to say the same thing 😂
!!Warning!! !!Warning!! Incoming vent post. Literally just a rambling vent. Please do not roast me. You do not have to read this comment. I'm just complaining 🤣 I am still enjoying the story. !!!! !!!! I know it's not gonna be Lou Chen, but that's who I want to be the ML. And I'm just sad okay??? It's gross that the ML is 5 years older than her while she's a teenager. And he's gonna try to stick around the whole time. that's more like grooming. It would be fine if he just left and didn't try to contact her during that time. or kept a hands of approach.
Oh thank heck. I was *worried* we would get a different R word. I officially love this story now 😭😭
hahahahahahahaha omg omg to (≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)
Wait wait! You may be thinking "Another hidden Identities??" But really, give it a chance. It mixes in superstitious with science and how is that NOT fun to read??!?! Plus we have an MC who is cold and aloof but wanting to actually experience life as an average (kinda of... not really) person. Of course, I can't give a truly will rounded review yet, we just don't have enough chapters. But so far it's been fun. Maybe a bit tropey, but still fun.
it's no problem. also if you wanted to make another character homomorphic in any other story, you'll want to show that there are accepting people first* so that you don't build the whole world into being homophobic. good luck with your story.
it was a very offending comment and wasn't one you even needed to add. by adding it and nothing positive you are promoting homophobic ideals even if it wasn't your intention. You could have literally said he was married and cheating on his spouse. instead it's "he's gay which is bad". that's not okay. I do hope you learn from this and do better in the future.
and before anyone comes in with "It's victoria ages" There were a lot of gay people in the Victoria ages. we have existed since humans began. Also there is literally Modern items every where in the story. there was no need for any homophobia.
like seriously. this book obviously has a lot of progressive thoughts. so why do we need homophobia. there was no need to add it.
Sorry hunny but gay people have standards. it's ****ed assume they'll flirt with you just bc they're gay uwu
oh yay homophobia
UwU it doesn't change something being toxic just because it's fictional~
That's adorable (≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)