BoomBangBig

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

milking word count 😕

Story interesting. Issues. Plot moves to slow. Snu snu is to long 10 chapters is pretty crazy with 1 girl. What happens when there 2 or more. Shorten them or make longer chapters. See from reader stand point why would any one coin that's much for no the story progression. Snu snu is great and all but overkilling it just makes things bland. We have 5 girls so far if each get there 10 chapters story won't move at all. Its a interesting story and will keep a eye on it. But at this moment the pacing is a bit to slow for my taste. Will come back to this once he moves out of beginner zone.

Why not buy a skill to power her up [img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking]

She has a name

oh they have names mean double

Seems they only get knock up if they have a name lol[img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking]